Adventure Awaits! Let's Plunder Another Time and Space!

I'll go fetch Ainz Ooal Gown. You stay here and don't move.

Ugh! Why add Eastern elements to a classic isekai (otherworld) story?! Author, I'm dying! Comparing isekai with Eastern elements is just not fun. Because Eastern authors always want their world to be stronger, so if both sides are playing with fire, they'll definitely throw in a bunch of things like spiritual energy to crush otherworldly gods—basically, the more awesome, the better! This hodgepodge makes me want to strip naked and run wild. What a great book! Why did the author let book reviews influence their writing of Eastern elements? It reminds me of those naive fantasy novels I used to read when I was young and naive. Especially *Yin Yang Evil Lord*... Ugh! That title...

Some might find this confusing, so let me briefly explain my personal understanding. The little dragon man was flying around randomly, accidentally ending up in the Empire. There, he randomly met Tang Qi. Well, since he was aiming to conquer the world, he figured he'd take whatever landed in first. After acquiring Tang Qi, he also took over Shanhua City, since the city lord and Tang Qi had an affair. This period coincided with the conflict between the royal and county governments, and the dragon man showed off on the battlefield, incidentally recruiting soldiers from both sides. The biggest beneficiary was the royal general, Xing Yan. Xing Yan happened to be extremely unhappy with this country (his adoptive father wanted to marry his biological father, who was quite happy to be his ghost father), so he surrendered very quickly and without hesitation. He surrendered...

Well, I don't expect to write more and get lucky with monthly votes—that's unrealistic. Let's get straight to the point. My thoughts on the new volume are: these scouts have too much screen time. Even the chapters that wiped out the Three Kingdoms Alliance (excluding the preparations) weren't much longer, giving the impression that the plot has slowed down. Another thing is that Duke Keane's relationship with the protagonist is too unreliable. This gives me a lingering worry. Even if Ma Xiaoming's past life (let me call him that for now) was an ordinary person, he's too negligent in understanding the emotional shifts of those around him and doesn't adequately assess the impressions he might give others...

May I ask how the author managed to create six tags?

(⊙_⊙) Starting with "This book is so long!", Just like the title says. What does that mean? Does it mean the book lacks highlights and feels "long," "wordy," or even "rambling"? The book has a very detailed setting, but this isn't a game, dude... What's the point of such a detailed setting? Readers want a story, right? Why spend so much time explaining the setting? Even a good book doesn't lay out its entire setting from the beginning, right? It's annoying! ↑ The first few chapters were okay in terms of writing style, but I just felt bored. After thinking about it, I've come to this conclusion. Also, is the author too resistant to mainstream culture? This is Chinese...

Ahem, this is the working stiff. Thanks to Pencil for contributing a review to my humble work! I don't have much to give back, so I'll reciprocate by offering my own review. Since these are all my subjective opinions, if there's anything biased, please forgive me… First, the world-building. Since I haven't read much, I can't make any definitive conclusions. But up to the first volume, the world-building is quite comprehensive, progressing from specific details to a broader perspective, with clear distinctions between detailed and concise parts. It effectively extracts the necessary scenarios from the larger world-building, providing a good stage for the story's development. That's all…

This book shares similarities with Overlord, but also has its differences. The vast story background, exciting fight scenes, and the psychological warfare and strategic deployments of the various characters show the author's considerable effort. However, some less-than-ideal transitions are a minor flaw, but the book is still worth reading. The rest is just filler... AA ahh ...

Does the author still recognize me? I read your fanfiction about the Undying Lord on Tieba and found it very interesting, so I followed you here. I'm Yelan. After lurking for two months, I finally mustered the courage to write a review. First of all, I'm certain now that this isn't plagiarism of Overlord. Ainz and Pipe are completely different people; their personalities are different. Your character design also differs from Overlord. Pipe has a dual personality, while Ainz has a single personality. Although both characters have passive-aggressive traits, are skeleton protagonists, and hold leadership positions, it doesn't mean that writing about leaders is plagiarism...

Having followed this story from the beginning, I'd consider myself a die-hard fan of Pencil-kun. In the earlier episodes, I have to say, Pencil-kun, you're really filthy! But, I must say, you're filthy in a beautiful way! The scene where the captain releases the undead to quickly defeat all the knights and avert the crisis in the final chapter of Brave New World was so satisfying to watch, though I felt a little sorry for the King. But I can understand, the captain is the protagonist after all. However, that scene reminded me of something I'd seen in anime before... Like the River of Death in Akkad from The Royal Order? Of course, it's not entirely like that. Later, I left a message for Pencil-kun, and Pencil-kun...