My Boss Is a Loli

Perhaps my title is a bit blunt and harsh, but I personally think it's fairly objective. I won't go into the minor issues mentioned in the text, such as "Don't touch me" and "XXX company." As a classic BOY MEETS GIRL story, honestly, after reading over twenty chapters, I still haven't figured out the main plot. If the reason the little girl finds the protagonist is foreshadowing, then the story should have subtly explained it, but it wasn't. I saw the author say that the detective is just a side plot, so why does a side plot take up so much space at the beginning of the story? The first ten or twenty chapters are crucial in setting the tone for the entire novel, but unfortunately, this is...

Jiaue's three-line love letter is excellent rhetorically, but there should be a line at the end, "It's better to forget each other than to fall in love." Is this a love letter or a breakup letter? = =. PQ's three-line love letter is like lyrics, not that it's in the lyrics, but that it has no connection to the context like lyrics. The most typical example is "The moon represents my heart." What does the moon have to do with the heart? The context doesn't say. The first two lines of the misty three-line love letter are very touching, but is the third line just a simple call? Perhaps it wanted to express something like "You are the belief in my heart, your name makes me brave and forward," but it's just a little bit warm...

This book is now completely finished! Hooray!

The countdown to completion has begun! Finally, the plot holes will be filled!

I'm Fengyin~･:*｡･:*≡( _•ω•)_ I didn't expect you to actually hold on. I hope you can continue to provide comfort here. It seems that the guy who got the pentakill has also come over. To be honest, creating this group back then might have been a mistake. Now, nobody's in the group anymore. The only interesting thing now is watching you guys continue~ Maybe in the future, when you guys really become famous, I can tell others that I chatted and laughed with that amazing person~ XD Well, that's all for now. I don't have much time to write anymore now, and it'll probably be years before I can pick up the banner again. That's all for now ¯\_( •́ω•...

I've been a bit busy lately. I finally managed to read all the updates, so I thought I'd add this long review. The author mentioned that his most admired writer is Tang Jia San Shao. Indeed, Tang San's works are controversial, but his character is very admirable. I hope you will become another Tang San. That's my message to the author. Now, to get to the point, if I were to write this book, firstly, I would make the meeting of the male and female protagonists more dramatic, more like Fate. You could refer to *Hayate the Combat Butler*. Secondly, I would make the little girl's character more distinct; she should be both tsundere and a rich girl. Characters like Ruan Ling and A Da would be necessary, but it wouldn't be the other way around—the supporting characters' personalities wouldn't be more prominent. The protagonist...

The first few chapters were so boring, I couldn't get interested at all =_=.

Well, it's understandable, whatever makes you happy, haha. That's a bit of an over-the-top, but I'm really looking forward to the male lead's comeback. You've hinted at his amnesia multiple times, so he must have been a total overpowered protagonist before... 23333 I'm really looking forward to the future developments, and the story of the male lead and the loli before he lost his memory. PS: I'm writing, but the more I write, the more lost I feel. Simply put, my writing style can't keep up with my ideas, haha. Although I'm so conflicted I want to die, I still think it's better to be strict with myself, so I'll continue to struggle and look through other people's books, read some professional books to learn some techniques. Actually, I saw your recommendation in that light novel writing group...

Commentator: To be honest, the story presented in the first volume of this novel is too loose. The beginning is okay, but when the office case starts, the whole story feels off track, and as it progresses, the main plot becomes unclear. It feels like the author didn't provide an outline, and even the main character relationships are haphazardly established. However, even so, I still have reasons to recommend it. First, the world-building in this novel is of a relatively classic type, and it happens to be a type that is not very common on the SF website. My criteria for judging whether a new novel is novel...

While struggling with homework in a slump, this high school student saw the author asked for a book review ← ← So I'll just write a few words. Honestly, I was a bit overwhelmed by the opening paragraph that led to the post—it was an analysis of how to make money, which felt too long, so I skipped it… Then came the case… which took up most of the book but wasn't particularly impressive. Take the foreign language characters, for example. The people involved in the case are definitely not strangers. The main characters are obviously not them, the receptionist is the one who provided the clues, and then there's the manager, the wife, Li and his son ← ← Hmm, seeing the author say they couldn't guess… I was wondering if it was the receptionist? Could this part be…?