The Substitute Brother

I woke up in a hospital. All around me were empty, white walls, and my mind, like those walls, was blank and confused, with a slight ache. Who am I? Why am I here? Strangely, I remember everything I've learned, except for the people around me. Not far away, a middle-aged woman and a doctor in a white coat were talking. The doctor was holding a CT scan, saying something I couldn't understand. ... I think I must have amnesia. And that middle-aged woman must be my mother, and my name is Lin Qiang.

Don't write Miss Xia as someone who says, "Because I'm beautiful, and you're not interested in me, I'll make you interested, and in the process, I'll fall in love with you." It would be better to portray the character's personality in more detail and make it more vivid. Secondly, the villain's presence is a little weak. Although villains are supposed to make a big splash when they appear, it feels abrupt without prior build-up. This is just a minor point; it's a matter of personal preference. One of my roommates felt the portrayal of rebellion was quite good. Finally, I want to praise this book. Unlike mainstream romantic comedies and harem stories with younger sisters, the author is exploring intellectual battles, which is very difficult—I'm a debater...

Let me start with the overall impression. The blend of brainstorming and bittersweet romance shows that the villain is also a very intelligent opponent. I hope the author continues the villainous style in the climax and ending. The author handles the transition between daily life and missions very well, without too many awkward moments. The author combines daily life and missions so that I'm thinking about the missions while reading about daily life, and worrying about daily life while reading about missions. This is excellent; no one is heartless, and having to worry about both aspects makes for a very enjoyable reading experience. However, this needs to be balanced; otherwise, it will affect the overall feeling, or the writing will become chaotic. Finding this balance is difficult, but so far it's very good. Now...

This made me forget about the real brother. For some reason, I projected myself onto him and experienced the NTR feeling of a sister who originally loved her but now sees someone else as her brother.

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The latest chapters were extremely uncomfortable to read. As a man, the male protagonist is truly disgusting. He made a mistake because of his arrogance but blamed it on Lin Qiang's heart, and his attitude in apologizing was utterly appalling. I simply cannot understand the protagonist's values. My relationship with this book ends here. Even the best girl couldn't support me continuing to read about this idiot protagonist.

Fran on the cover is amazing!

Regarding the "Ice Heart Mantra" mentioned in the text... That was replaced with censored content... You know...

I swear

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