How Did I, a Hero, End Up as the Phoenix Young Lady?

So far, it's absolutely amazing. First of all, the princess setting is fantastic (I'm not a masochist). The writing is smooth, and the story is captivating. At first, I thought the hero was a bit out of character, but that's not actually the case; once you understand it, he's truly incredible. However, there are some drawbacks: 1. The storyline is too long, making it slightly drawn out. This is understandable; it's a common problem, after all, authors need to make a living. (But it's really not satisfying.) 2. The female lead's strength isn't clearly defined. I still don't understand whether she's Platinum level or higher. Perhaps the current description of her strength is from the perspective of her attendant (I forgot her name), making it somewhat abstract. For now, I still consider her invincible. ...

Wow, that's amazing perseverance! You've been writing for over two years.

There are so few people... I'll keep the rest concise and try to finish it this month.

I suggest this author take a good look at how other 1v1 novels write their romance storylines. They've managed to mix sweetness into clichés, turning a 1v1 story into a harem.

It looks quite good, and I'm currently following it. This novel tells the story of a female protagonist who was a human hero in her past life and is now a phoenix, embarking on a revenge (and sweet romance) journey with a male protagonist who is a devoted fan of the hero. The author's writing is also very ornate, giving a refreshing feeling. These ornate phrases, combined with battle scenes, create a thrilling and exciting atmosphere. However, it does have its flaws; the ornate style is excessive. How excessive? Even female characters with only a small role in the book have their every smile, gesture, and movement accompanied by a clearly carefully crafted description. Haha, because of the ornate style...

Your strategy of suppressing your combat power is truly disgusting. You insist on learning bad habits from Japanese light novels instead of good ones, right? You drop two levels at the start, and then you run into someone who was at the same level as before you dropped. It's really frustrating to watch.

In short, without the female lead, the male lead is nothing. The sacrifices made by the male and female leads are completely unequal. This inequality makes it impossible for the male lead, from a plot perspective, to even fall in love with anyone else. At least not until the female lead explicitly takes back what she gave him or abandons him. Who saved the male lead's life? Who taught him swordsmanship? Who arranged for him to cultivate the End? Who was with whom did the male lead get to see the princesses? Who enabled him to receive the Oran inheritance? And so on. Even in harem novels, like *Battle Through the Heavens*, the little phoenix stands in the position of the old master. The male lead can open...

Overall, it's well-written, but the word count is too low. Please update soon! (Minor spoilers? However, judging from the chaotic comments section, it should reassure many readers.) ---------------------------------------------------- There should still be some space between Volume Two and Volume Three, and also some in the middle of Volume Three. Mysera's emotions are too intense and abrupt, while Vera's experiences have been extensively foreshadowed in the previous volumes, making this section feel slow and bloated, which is not appealing to readers. The fact that comments like "Why not start a harem?" Have appeared is...

The story seems promising, with well-written interactions between the male and female leads and a reasonable premise. However, I find a few shortcomings: 1. A fight scene was too long: The battle against the inner guards, starting in chapter 60, lasted a full five chapters. Although there was some background information provided, the fight was clearly excessive. This might be due to the limited update frequency; the male lead was supposed to be bedridden for five days, which seemed a bit unpleasant. 2. The half-elf's death was too sudden: From the moment they met, the half-elf was given significant screen time, even having a long talk with the female lead, giving me the impression that she would join the main group. Then she was instantly killed. I suggest that supporting characters destined to die shouldn't be given too much screen time unless it's just for dramatic effect...

I haven't been in a good mood lately... And I'm not satisfied with what I wrote, so I'm planning to take a break.