After Practicing the Formless Demon Art, I Became My Rival's Beloved Wife

Did you know that the romance in your book should have ended when it was a quarter of the way through? All that "original intentions, obsessions, and pure feelings" stuff was just forced and pointless, you know? 😅 You insisted on writing almost two million words just to make it feel real, didn't you?

First, let's talk about the protagonist's personality: naive! He's genuinely naive, that's undeniable. As a character like a young master from a demonic path, I'll use his male form to represent his past life and his female form to represent his present life. In his past life, the protagonist possessed both power and status, but was naive and inexperienced in worldly affairs, with strong sense of right and wrong and deep-seated obsessions. The problem is that the plot seems to have some loopholes. Leaving aside the demonic path, although his adoptive father might have been disappointed by the protagonist's excessive obsessions, no one bothered to look for such a large person after his disappearance; they just assumed he went out to cultivate. And then there's the heavenly tribulation on that mountain caused by the protagonist, the three-year agreement being a duel between the leaders of the righteous and demonic paths—no one paid attention except for the protagonist, Lin Tian? ...

Just a quick rant: the term "girl" refers to female students in modern society. During the Republic of China era, it was simply called "girl." While "girl" is sometimes used to refer to women in modern society, it's generally not used in fictional, local NPCs to describe women. The text also contains numerous instances of local phrases juxtaposed with modern settings, which really feels jarring and jarring.

I recommend quickly scrolling to Chapter 1 after seeing the sweet scene to see what Su Ming was like before her fall from grace; it'll give you a better feel for it!

The Formless Demonic Art, emm, Bai Yuxiu?

I thought it was pretty good when I read over 200 chapters. But after half a year, I came back and couldn't finish over 300 chapters. First, the cultivation realm, the most fundamental element of martial arts and fantasy novels, wasn't well-developed. In other novels, the protagonist's advancement is incredibly difficult, requiring secret realms, treasures, and elixirs. But our Su Ming, wow, reaches the peak of his cultivation realm just by having a wet dream—unbelievable! You say it's the Formless Demonic Art? Okay, no problem. But I must mention the name is quite poetic. Secondly, the logic of the cultivation realm is unclear; readers can't immediately grasp the concept of the realm...

This female lead seems just as clueless as Ruizhi. How did she even survive before? She's completely brainless and lacks common sense.

I have a suggestion for the author: in marriage-reincarnation novels, it's unnecessary to portray the female lead as too weak or merely a pretty face. I've also read marriage-reincarnation novels where the female lead is quite capable.

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The story begins with the female lead and male lead making three promises: one year, three years, and finally, the ten-year promise mentioned at the beginning. The male lead, Lin Tian, in his fully-formed form after the finale, is reborn to the day before or a few days before the three-year promise. The female lead, Su Ming, in her fully-formed form after the finale, is divided into two parts. One part, possessing the Formless Demonic Art and her own soul, travels back to her three-year promise self, transforming her into a woman, but finding a reason to make her appear as a man using some random technique. The other part, using the female lead's original body with some instincts, is then sent to the male lead. Ideally, this would include some kind of plastic surgery ability, so on the day of the three-year promise, the female lead...