A Vampire Loli in the City

I think this work is good, but the author doesn't update often. I originally wanted to give it a 10, but because of this, I'm only giving it an 8. If the author updated more frequently, I might give you my monthly pass, and I'll give you a like every week. Author, keep it up! -_-B Author, keep it up T_T The beginning is good, the development is good, and the plot is quite good too. The only drawback is—it updates very infrequently! (￣∇￣) I think if the author could overcome this flaw, it would have a lot of...

The author has portrayed the female lead exceptionally well, and I especially love the yuri (lesbian) elements. It's completely different from other flashy, cheap stories (does the author have some hidden past?). I'm a little sad that the school life is gone, and I love her vampire-like loli persona. The gun-fu is a nice touch, but it feels like something's missing (purely personal preference, since I came for the vampire loli). I hope there are fewer guys trying to seduce the female lead; she genuinely loves and relies on Lin Fan. While I find calling her "Onii-chan" really cute, it still feels a little awkward. I hope the yuri relationship lasts a lifetime, and Lin Fan is just a third wheel. I genuinely love...

This is truly a great article. When I was bored, I picked up my phone and found this excellent piece. I ended up reading it in a whole day, completely engrossed! The opening immediately grabs your attention. It's a mystery novel with a science fiction theme. It contains some blush-inducing scenes—basically, fan service! If you're an average person and you find this book, I recommend opening it. You'll find yourself completely absorbed. If you're a lolicon, you absolutely must read it because the plot will deeply captivate you, making it impossible to look away. [I might be a lolicon myself.] I've read many...

The author writes very well, it's very engaging, and although they don't update often, they never skimp on content or fail to update regularly, which is truly rare. I will always support the author, and I will vote for this book whenever I have a monthly pass. I will also praise this book, and I hope the author can update more often. Please keep up the good work, author! Keep going, keep going! (ง •̀_•́)ง Make this book even better! Finally, I'll cheer for the author again, and I will always support them. (Last but not least, (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) I still hope the author can update as much as possible, thank you!)

When I first saw your novel, I thought it was pretty good, so I added it to my favorites. When I saw your writing style, I realized it was your first time writing a novel, and it's normal for it not to be perfect since it's your first time. I've often seen your work in other people's novels before; maybe you felt your writing wasn't good enough, so you looked for inspiration from others. I know you're a student and don't have much time to update. I'm a student too, so I understand your difficulties. But don't worry, your efforts won't be in vain! Keep it up! ヽ(`Д´)ﾉ

Sorry for the long wait, everyone! The post-wedding epilogue is here!

I have a few words I'm not sure if I should say, but what kind of kid is 160cm tall in the first year of junior high? And a girl at that! What kind of kid is 178cm tall in the first year of junior high? Even though it's a boy, your last sentence about how it's nothing for adults... I just want to ask, is the author from the Giant race or something? Even if you're wrong, you can't just make things up like that! Keep improving. Seriously, why does the protagonist have all sorts of abilities? There's no foreshadowing, and he just suddenly knows everything, killing without batting an eye. Wow, that's impressive!

When I first read the synopsis, I was confused because isn't this supposed to be a gender-swap story? Why isn't the tag "gender-swap"? After reading it, I felt it was very incongruous—a high school graduate becoming a loli without any awkwardness, and her psychology completely transformed into that of a little loli. Speaking of which, wasn't she originally a boy? Was she gay to begin with? Otherwise, why didn't she show any resistance when she encountered that man? And why did she feel nothing after killing someone? If it wasn't intentional on the author's part, then it's because the author's skill in psychological description is lacking. Having read this far, I personally lean towards the latter...

First of all, I think this book is excellent, so I'm giving it a perfect 10. Secondly, the author's updates are too slow! /(ㄒOㄒ)/~ Take the plot, for example. It's quite dramatic, but the male lead, Lin Fan, is basically just a background character (T_T). His abilities and background are unclear; out of 260,000 words, at most 10,000 are about him. And the female lead is a little girl! It's not good for her to be fighting all the time, right? Who else would they choose if not Lin Fan? Also, author, I gave you my precious first monthly ticket! Supporting you, author!

Okay, in 2024 we'll still be driving excavators here to dig up graves.