Counterattack! My 'War' With a Winner at Life

First, I apologize to the author. I initially mistook this review for a terrible work, something meant to put me to sleep. Please don't be angry, and listen to my explanation. I like to read a book in one sitting, and your work was incredibly slow to load at the beginning, not to mention the first volume, which felt more like a screenplay than a novel. It almost made me fall asleep at lunchtime. So, I decisively gave up at noon. However, I did remember it because it's rare to find a novel that made me want to fall asleep. I've never seen an original novel use so many Japanese anime images, although looking back now, the author's use of...

First of all: Thank you for the invitation, author. Let me start by sharing my first impression of this book. To be honest, my first impression was that it was dry and boring, completely uninteresting. The opening chapters are over 10,000 words each, and when I saw that, I immediately felt a bit overwhelmed. However, this didn't stop me from reading on. The beginning of the book describes the protagonist's various aspects of his military life and environment. Frankly, when I was halfway through, I suddenly had a question: am I reading a web novel or a light novel? I shook my head, dismissing the thought, and continued reading. As it went on, I felt increasingly bored. To the point that...

[Light Novel Review] Commentator: Peter To be honest, this author has improved very quickly, completing the transformation from a novice to a mature writer in just 500,000 words. Starting from the second half of the third volume, the author's writing style, attention to detail, character development, and plot design have greatly improved compared to before, and are becoming more and more perfect. At the beginning, this is definitely a sleep-inducing article. In the first two volumes, the author made almost every mistake that a novice can make, such as: (1) This novel, which is told from a first-person perspective, actually has some parts that are almost third-person narratives, as if the protagonist is observing the world with the eyes of God...

Dear author, first of all, thank you for the invitation! Before discussing the plot, characters, and other specific aspects of Jie Shao's novel, *Counterattack! My "War" with the Winners of Life*, let me first talk about some of the book's overall "features." (Copied from Shufang) I think the book's background is quite vast and difficult to control, but the author has written it very skillfully. I doubt anyone else has that level of ability; Xiao You writes from school meetings, which is far inferior to the vastness of the universe. Secondly, the plot is very impressive. The opening with a war scene startled me. The tag I saw was romance, but the author is just...

Honestly, this work feels like the male lead's harem is constantly being cuckolded by a supporting character. The protagonist's personality is also inconsistent, sometimes cold and sometimes sarcastic, which is really disgusting. I need a moment to calm down. If you have a strong sense of self-centeredness or possessiveness, please don't read this; it will disgust you to death. Even if you're serious, don't read it. One chapter the male lead is shouting about revenge, and the next dozens of chapters are just lighthearted school life, or rather, watching others build their harems. The protagonist's character design is a major flaw; one chapter he's cold-blooded, and the next he's a saint. It's really sarcastic. To make the plot less cold, this novel mindlessly inserts another supporting character's lighthearted harem life...

I quickly finished reading it and am writing this review now. The author definitely tricked me. The synopsis and title led me to initially conclude it was a story of a male protagonist's rise to power, with NTR (Netorare) involving the second male lead, just with a tragicomedy twist. And that was certainly the case at the beginning. The author emphasized how the second male lead's harem exploded, and how he had contact with his harem members to varying degrees—a classic underdog-turned-hero story with a strong NTR vibe. The problem is, I read it from the male protagonist's perspective. When the author described it from the second male lead's point of view, the harem atmosphere was overwhelming. Those with a vivid imagination might even find it erotica, but my immediate feeling was that the male protagonist had been NTR'd, which was very unpleasant. So…

First of all, thank you for the invitation! Before discussing the plot, characters, and other specific aspects of Jie Shao's novel, *Counterattack! My "War" with the Winners of Life*, let me first talk about some of the book's overall "features." One, I'll tentatively call it "dialogue-heavy." My biggest impression upon first reading this novel was—so much dialogue! The protagonist and his girlfriends are all incredibly talkative. How talkative? To put it simply, everything is for dialogue, for all dialogue, for everything in dialogue... If it weren't for the relatively normal worldview, I think even a stray dog ​​in this book would be...

Well, I haven't finished reading this book, but I want to vent a little. First, I admire the author's hard work. To be honest, I think the novel is quite well-written, and I quite like it. That's my opinion after reading part of it. However, seeing the pitifully low number of favorites makes me feel sorry for the author. Now, let me share my personal observations. First, the male lead is undoubtedly a tyrant. Then, seeing the title, I felt it was about the male lead stealing someone else's girlfriend, right? And I have to say, I feel the second male lead is more eye-catching than the male lead. At first, I read it with the mindset that the male lead would eventually steal my girlfriend, but...

As a new reader of this novel, offering my perspective as an ordinary person, the prologue of the first volume was incredibly exciting. The protagonist, Jie Shao, a member of the Dog Tag Squad, sacrificed so much for his comrades, yet left behind very little – it was quite moving. From the second chapter of the first volume, where the protagonist leaves the border and encounters Aunt Ono, the story gradually weaves in a harem element, which feels very satisfying. That's all for now; I'll stop my review here. I'll write more later if I have more ideas. Best of luck, author!

I haven't finished reading Jie Shao's book due to time constraints. Well, I'm writing this review today because I was invited~ Author, please don't have too high expectations for my review, —△—after all, most of my reviews are just suggestions, right? (If you don't like this review, you can ignore it.) Actually, speaking of the title, I was quite looking forward to it at first. Seeing a winner in life build a harem, my first thought was, will it develop like "Saekano: From the Novel to Heroine"? But after reading the first chapter, I immediately knelt down (☄⊙ω⊙)☄… Damn, this male lead isn't just a passerby, he's practically radiating pink energy! He's practically radiating a creepy pink aura…