I Have a Girlfriend, So How Did My Bro End Up Conquering Me?

First, regarding the beginning, when the female lead was male, she had a girlfriend who was constantly being cheated on, yet she still trusted her girlfriend, and this was given a huge amount of screen time. Later, the male lead helped her, but she didn't believe him, and he didn't explain. He even let the male supporting character take advantage of her a lot; I read it several times. Later, when she was female, she was supposed to only allow the male lead to touch her, but she still let a group of lesbians have sex with her, indirectly cheating on the male lead. Moreover, the male lead is portrayed as extreme and yandere; when he discovered the lesbian woman assaulting the female lead, he didn't react and even let her go—it's completely absurd. Initially, the cross-dressing trope was very appealing to me, and the author's tragic past made me want to read more. But the more I read, the more disgusted I became, to the point where I wanted to curse...

In Volume 3, Chapter 98, the last few paragraphs about speeding are something I hope the author can remove. Every year, there are numerous traffic accidents caused by speeding, and many people never return. Speeding fines are meant to deter drivers from speeding and thus prevent accidents. However, the text contains statements like, "I have money, you can speed all you want, I'll pay you off if anything happens," which shows a disregard for human life. I sincerely hope the author can delete this section. Readers come from all age groups, and I really don't want any immature readers to act in a way that suggests money can buy them a life of indifference. If anyone reads this...

A word of advice for newcomers to this book: avoid the pure romance and subjugation sections, especially the subjugation one. If you read this novel, it will definitely be the most addictive one you've ever read. Of course, there are exceptions for those who enjoy all genres. Go ahead and read it if you want, but absolutely do not read the subjugation one. That's all the advice I can give.

This comment is simply something I wanted to say to the author and doesn't discuss any part of the book. I've noticed Miaomiao's recent mood swings and have a few words to say to you. Miaomiao, I understand why you can't let go of this person and this relationship. Actually, from your writing, I can tell you're a very emotional person, and your personality and views on love are probably similar to Lin Da'ai in the book. You must have valued that person a lot to be so hung up on them, because not everyone can give you hope and help when you were at your lowest point, perhaps because being with them...

Unbeknownst to me, Miao Miao's book has been with me for a long time. To be honest, it's the first transformation book I've ever read, and I've invested the most emotion in it. That's probably why I was angry and sad when Miao Miao stopped updating and disappeared. Actually, you can tell from Miao Miao's writing that the emotional events she experienced were definitely real, so those who keep questioning her, I suggest you read the book carefully before making any judgments. Just like with someone I care about, I feel my attitude towards Miao Miao is what you might call "complaining and grumbling, but still hoping for my own..."

Poisoned to death, then transformed into a lesbian and a lesbian, you might as well just put both labels on them, instead of luring people in and killing them. I don't dare read the author's new book either, for fear of being poisoned.

Let's start with a hypothetical scenario: if Cheng Feng were to be diagnosed with a terminal illness, would he take Lin Xian with him? First, let's analyze Cheng Feng's character. His love for Lin Xian, his words "Lin'er, your world is enough for me," his possessive and almost obsessive nature—Cheng Feng has said Lin Xian can only be his—he's obsessed to the point of being demonic, deeply in love. Would he really bear to leave his Lin'er alone in this cold world? For him, even death wouldn't stop him; they would be together forever, inseparable. This is obsession, like a drowning person grasping at a straw, refusing to let go until death. It's either hold on tightly or let the straw sink with them to the bottom of the sea...

I hope the author can take better care of themselves in the future and finish the story. I've pinned this book to the top and am waiting for your return.

The earlier parts of the novel were cheerful and heartwarming, even though you know it's fiction. However, I can say quite directly that the later parts gradually became more depressing. Of course, this is just one aspect, please don't take offense at what I'm saying. I hope you can cheer yourself up. After all, good writing requires not only a good mental state but also a healthy body! You should probably rest for a few days and reflect on life, because your situation is likely to have some impact on your mental health. Sometimes you may not realize it yourself, but your writing will reflect your psychological state. I hope you...

They're already hitting on the guy right from the start, huh? 😳 It's like they're going into battle together, isn't it?