After I Transmigrated, I Was About to Master Peerless Martial Arts

Hey everyone, wait a minute! I'm too busy with the new book's promotion to S-rank lately. Once things are settled with the new book, I'll be back.

I'm fucking speechless. They squandered a golden opportunity. The premise was excellent, but the plot was truly awful. I knew this novel was doomed from the Fengyue Tower scene. Seeing the Night King part, I was utterly speechless. Are you trying to write a historical romance? How is this any different from the typical female-oriented novels on Qidian? Aside from the beginning, it's almost identical. Copying poems and dancing—you really know how to write that! Let me write a typical female-oriented novel for you: A transmigrates, discovers he has a cheat ability, realizes someone wants to harm him, so he wanders the martial arts world, meets a few supporting characters or future male leads, but during his wanderings, some unexpected events occur, he exposes his true nature, and is discovered by a domineering prince…

Let me point out a few shortcomings from a reader's perspective. First, the protagonist's infidelity should be clarified early on; dragging it out makes many readers uncomfortable. Second, the protagonist shouldn't be so hesitant; if they want to do something, they should act decisively and boldly. Third, if this is a male-oriented novel, it's best to avoid gender-swap and homosexuality. Finally, to sum it up, NTR + weakling + male-male relationships are something I can't continue reading. Of course, if this is a female-oriented novel, please let me know, and I will apologize! (The following is some rant; you'd better not read it.) Initially, when I saw NTR, I was actually hoping...

The author has been writing the plot in the last few chapters with a completely brainless hand. In the original novel, Shen Xian initially liked Xu Ziqing's sister, and only after disguising himself as a man and developing a relationship with Xu Ziqing did they become gay. But now, the male protagonist, as a transmigrator, didn't have those experiences with Xu Ziqing, so logically he shouldn't like him. Shen Xian liked Xu's sister when he died, so his remnant soul should have had feelings for her, not be constantly lusting after Xu Ziqing. You keep attributing everything to the will of Heaven, but what hasn't happened hasn't happened, and now he's inexplicably preparing to defy Heaven! Don't try to emphasize that the protagonist isn't stupid; in the current situation, after the protagonist turns evil, he'll be like a weakling...

First of all, this is just my personal opinion. I don't know the author's gender. I wanted to make some lighthearted comments, but I'm afraid of causing any negative impact, so I'll try to restrain myself and just enjoy it. Reading this novel is like being about to have sex and then getting knocked out... Yes, that's the feeling. In terms of plot, just when you're expecting what will happen next... Well... Then you're told it's over... At the beginning, when you enter the Six Doors, you think there will be some sequel, but after the fight, it's over. The plot lacks coherence; it always feels like something's missing before you move on to the next chapter. Then there's the issue of the characters... It's like going to a brothel and your mom calls over a girl, and then you realize...

Actually, I've been hesitant to write a book review. Since my feelings are similar to other negative reviews, I won't go into too much harshness here. I want to offer the author some encouragement; your novel isn't bad, it's quite entertaining. However, criticism is still necessary regarding the male lead's marriage, yuri (lesbian) elements, and harem dynamic. You really should reconsider your writing, because I can sense the author's constant hesitation and numerous revisions throughout the book. For example, the Night King, who later becomes a woman. Your interpersonal relationships are also quite chaotic: the martial arts constable dislikes the Ming Cult, and the Ming Cult's Holy Maiden is the same married woman who was previously interested in the male lead. Now the Night King has a wife, and the Night King has become...

I don't usually write book reviews, but I had to get this off my chest, so I'll share my thoughts. The book isn't terrible; the opening is very engaging, and while the author's writing isn't quite at the level of a top-tier writer, the pacing is decent, and most of the suspense is understandable. However, this promising start was squandered. First, the male lead is a cuckolded victim. Most of the time, the goal of this plot is a reversal and a slap in the face, but why is the woman who cuckolded him being dragged out for so long? By the second chapter, half a year has passed, and reading with this thorn in my side is extremely difficult. Second, the male lead's personality is really strange and too weak. If it weren't for the satisfying way he slapped Mo Qiao in the face, I might have become withdrawn...

It's been almost two years, and I've come to sweep the grave.

I rarely write reviews. From the beginning until now, I've always just quietly read books and voted for them, reading out of pure interest. I even ignore the many plot holes left by authors when they were still developing. I read what I can get into, and drop what I can't, rarely saying much. This is only the second time I've written a review after reading so many books. Why did I suddenly want to write one? Like the first time, I was fed garbage again... Good heavens, as a guy, I initially clicked on this because of the "cross-dressing" tag... At least the cross-dressing elements were there... But as I read on, the character became Dongfang Bubai!??? Male...

The premise is good, but the plot really needs improvement. After reading for a while, I noticed the protagonist's intelligence seemed to be forcibly lowered whenever he saw a girl! This is a novel; he doesn't need to be so obsessed with girls, otherwise the protagonist's character becomes incongruous. The author's writing style is decent, but the plot... The contrast between the writing style and the plot is quite large. Personally, I feel the author isn't very good at weaving different plot lines together; the transitions are a bit stiff, even resorting to forced stupidity to achieve the effect. However, this novel is worth reading; I think the author can improve and resolve these issues with further writing.