As the gears of fate begin to turn, a delinquent boy from a broken, financially struggling family transforms into a girl in his dreams and is sent to the parallel-world city of Dongshui in the guise of a pretty boy. On the stage of this near-future metropolis, every encounter, whether an embrace as they fall from a skyscraper or a pact in a sky garden, seems arranged by invisible hands. Having failed countless times over ten thousand years, Lucifer vows that this time she will seize fate by the throat and succeed. She will do whatever it takes to completely remake the soul of the boy inside this body into a fallen angel who meets her aesthetic standards, one so breathtaking that even Fan Xing would fall.
Some grumbling after rereading this book (please ignore the comments)
I first saw this book on UC, though it was probably serialized on Qidian at the time… Since I wasn't too into yuri at the time, I didn't read it much. But… well… about a week later, I decided I only read yuri… but I was following other books then, so I still didn't pay much attention to this one. However, it wasn't until I started looking for some books only available on SF (a Chinese online literature platform) and started paying attention to related genres that I clicked on this book again because of its familiar cover. To be honest, the first chapter of the prologue was pretty good; the flashback opening was quite enjoyable. However, from the protagonist being in the cultivation tank…
It's supposed to be a lesbian relationship, but nowadays it's mostly men, isn't it?
The day the author updates will be the day I livestream myself eating shit.
Don't take it seriously... This is just a confession from some author.
Roughly speaking, it's been four years since I first embarked on this path of writing novels. Along the way, I've naturally experienced many things, and only now has "The Fallen Angel of the Abyss" been born. I still remember why I first had the idea to write novels. To be honest, when I started trying to write, I hadn't yet encountered the genres of "web novels" or "light novels." What truly inspired me was a work by an American fantasy author called "The Name of the Wind," but its sales in mainland China were very limited, and it seems to still be sitting on the shelf...
Thoughts after staying up all night
Hello everyone, today I'm bringing you a brief review of the science fiction novel *The Fallen Angel of the Abyss*. I stayed up very late reading it, so I'm a little dazed. Please forgive me if I'm wrong. First, let's talk about the atmosphere the book creates. How to put it? The book has a rather sophisticated feel! If every novel is like a house full of unknowns, then this book is like a luxurious villa nestled among towering mountains, constructed with golden bricks and jade tiles. You can feel the opulence between the lines; the author clearly put a lot of effort into creating this atmosphere. If you don't pour your heart and soul into it...
Some simple thoughts (please don't be offended!)
First of all, I'm not good with words, yes, I mean, I'm not good with words, so please forgive me if I unintentionally offend anyone. Now, let's get to the point—it's absolutely fantastic, that's my first impression. Regarding the handling of details, you've truly done an impeccable job. Of course, I can't possibly achieve that. But there's one slight drawback—even knowing you dislike people who don't like to read articles closely—perhaps the attention to detail makes your writing a little stiff… I don't mean anything by dislike! I'm just mentioning it, hoping you can pay a little more attention, because it might make browsing a…
Are you not updating anymore?
Writing the story directly is better than describing the environment. (I'm not literature)
I just think the author is too verbose and the plot is too convoluted. Couldn't you have just made the beginning simpler? I read the opening three times before I finally understood that the two women were lovers and one was dying. Frankly, this kind of plot is obviously foreshadowing the beginning and the end. Just make it simple and clear to us. These days, readers are into fast-paced reading; many people probably won't read it after just one confusing opening. Then the protagonist is in the water, and then a girl is being chased—it's too drawn out. While I don't object to beautiful environmental descriptions, it's undeniable that it took me over an hour to finally understand...
He sat up abruptly in his deathbed, short and weak, and had not yet recovered.
I spent the whole morning standardizing some chapter titles. The official update will take at least a week because too much time has passed, the original manuscript is unavailable, and I have forgotten many plot points and foreshadowing, so I need to review them. In addition, the updates for my new book, "Daydreaming," cannot be interrupted.