I Transmigrated to Another World and Got Involved with a Princess

What exactly made you portray the protagonist as a clueless, naive fool from the slums from the very beginning? Was you trying to depict a journey of the mind? As a transmigrator from Earth, he acts like a complete idiot, cowardly yet pretending to be righteous, speaking crudely and acting like a thug. Having a soulless, bumpkin male lead in a novel really makes me lose the courage to subscribe. Then he meets a similarly foolish princess, and of all the ways to solve the problem, she insists on asking this fool for help. If all else fails, can't she just use her hands? Always relying on alcohol to embolden herself to do things she wouldn't normally dare to do—how is this princess any different from a cornered dog...?

At first, it was fine; the male lead's personality was goofy, but not described much. However, starting from the tower climb, his personality became overly goofy, lacking serious moments, making even the occasional serious scenes feel odd. His actions are completely nonsensical, and he speaks without thinking. This style is fine occasionally or moderately, but overuse becomes tiring. I haven't read much yet, but the male lead's personality is already starting to annoy me, so I hope they can change this style.

Personally, I think the protagonist is a complete idiot. He seems so amazing, it's incredibly frustrating. If he weren't the protagonist, he would definitely be a clown in a novel, a mentally challenged passerby. His various reactions make it feel like watching a monkey in a civilized way. Some of his actions are abnormal. Occasionally he acts silly, which is fine, but he's just perfect material for a meme video. His character is a bit off, which makes him somewhat annoying. I think the male lead is useless except for acting like a monkey. This is just my personal opinion of the male lead.

I've only read a few chapters so far. First, the good points: the premise is novel and makes you want to keep reading. The bad points: it's awful!!! The male lead is really unpleasant to watch. He's constantly being a goofball without considering the context; honestly, he's clearly a background character or a supporting male character, yet he's the protagonist. He seems like an idiot. His goofiness brings me absolutely no joy, only discomfort, and I want to drop the book. Who has ever seen a male lead who only knows how to act stupid and childish from beginning to end, like an idiot? If he were truly stupid, I could understand, but he's just portrayed as a goofball. I hope the author can improve this, be more serious, and occasionally add some unintentional goofiness—wouldn't that be nice? ...

Pure love or harem?

These are some personal suggestions I gave the author. The early part was okay, but it basically fell apart after the gods entered the plot later. It's clear the author wanted to create a grander world, but this actually caused confusion in the main storyline, making it unclear what was going on. It seems the author currently lacks the ability to handle such a grand world. The author probably also realized that the early reviews were much better than the later ones, because the addition of parallel worlds and other large worlds in the later stages made the entire plot unclear, rendering the groundwork laid earlier worthless. Actually, removing the god element would have made the story better; it's something worth learning from...

I'm so happy to have watched this on April 16, 2023! Thank you for being with me for six years of my youth, and thank you for introducing me to Pineapple Bun.

I'll just share my initial impressions; please don't be offended if you disagree. —Well, after reading the first volume, I felt the protagonist's personality was overly goofy, bordering on stupid and even a bit disgusting. I wanted him to die a few times. However, considering the author's current writing style isn't very good, I'll continue reading for a while longer, hoping the author will improve their writing; otherwise, I won't be able to continue and will have to drop it. I'm out of things to say, so I'll just add some filler...

Intelligence reduction

The male protagonist who gets thwarted to the end