All the Beautiful Girls Who Confess to Me Are Nonhuman Big Shots
向我表白的美少女全是非人类大佬
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 370k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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182Chapters
1.9MClicks
15kFavorites
1.2kLikes
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The premise is good, but the plot is somewhat lacking.
The premise is good—confessing your love makes you stronger, and the male lead is very handsome (which makes it very relatable, doge!). However, the plot is somewhat lacking. I won't go into the textbook-perfect face-slapping moments in the daily life scenes, but the flaws in the battle sequences are too obvious. So far, in 70 chapters, there have been three battles, all of which involve the male lead taking the girl to a secret realm, leveling up there, the school's security measures failing (or the teachers protecting the school being unable to enter), the male lead and the girl facing a mini-boss, being defeated, the girl confessing her love, and the male lead's power skyrocketing to defeat the boss. It feels like a deus ex machina. And while this kind of plot might be acceptable once or twice, it's really...
Are all the female leads virgins? Please answer.
Will the blood fall? Which chapter?
The male lead seems too strong; it doesn't quite feel like a reverse seduction scenario.
If you're going to be a jerk, then go all the way. It seems like this kind of tactic is outdated.
It is suggested to change it to first person.
It just didn't feel quite right. There weren't enough dramatic scenes. As a supernatural non-human girl, her character wasn't sick enough. Without that kind of manic infatuation, it wasn't exciting enough. A domineering possessiveness would be much more satisfying.
I think you should reduce the chapter length from 4,000 words to 2,000 words, then no one will say it's too short!
Just a heads-up to the author: the dialogue between Mu Chuxian and the protagonist in Chapter Seventeen is prone to leaving much to the imagination and is ambiguous. There are comments posted in the text that you can check out. This is a real pain point for those who like to overthink things.
It's great! Author, keep up the good work! I love it!