The Beautiful Girls I Raised as Disciples Are All Hidden Powerhouses
我养成的美少女徒儿都是隐藏大佬
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- Ongoing
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- 385k Words
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- Ancient Style
- Updated
- 5y ago
- English
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Let's call it a day. The author has said they're not updating anymore. Actually, I think this one is more to my liking than "The World-Destroying Empress," it's just a pity...
I subscribed to this book, not missing a single chapter. I even skipped through parts of the novel next door, "The Empress," and you're saying this book is no longer being written?
Furthermore, since they voluntarily offered their talents, why arrange a one-year contract? The disciple's current naive and innocent character is really unsatisfying. Don't let the book end up concluding that the master is a great demon king stirring up wars everywhere, while everyone else is a good guy.
Visiting graves and observing He Xue's writing style might help improve one's writing, but the author's skill is lacking.
Will there be more updates?
The phrase "not knowing whether to laugh or cry" has been used a bit too often.
Did the male protagonist suddenly gain his power? He's invincible, but right now he gives me the impression of having 100 in physical strength but only 1 in intelligence—the mentality of an elementary school student...
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Let me offer a few suggestions. First, the pacing is an issue. The beginning was fine, but the pacing noticeably accelerated during the apology scenes with various sects. There felt a lot of information, yet it also felt superficial, completely lacking the satisfying feeling of someone showing off. Second, there are character issues. The emotional progression felt unnatural. If someone is simply hugging and kissing a newly recognized master out of gratitude, it feels mindless. Also, there's the characterization of Xi Meng. I felt the author intended to portray her as a naive and innocent character, but now she seems to be only naive. While a touch of naivety is acceptable, it shouldn't be overdone. Personally, I still find this kind of overpowered, show-offy story very interesting...
Why make things so complicated when a slap could solve it?
By the way, did you change your bio?