The Quirks of My Romance with My Older Sister
我与姐姐的恋爱槽点
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The writing is fluent and the concept is novel, but the plot negatively impacts the reading experience.
Light Novel Reviewer: CC Hello everyone, it's been a while! How are you all doing? Due to the dual pressures of work and side hobbies, I've only been able to maintain a barely positive attitude towards work and studies lately. Book reviews aren't exactly easy, but thankfully, aside from being a task, reading itself is a very good pastime—I'm quite satisfied with this one. So, let's get to the main topic. This time, the book is "My Sister and I's Romantic Flaws." Just seeing the title, I immediately smelled the cheesy scent of a romantic comedy. I almost instantly concluded—this is a slice-of-life romance novel...
Some thoughts on Yuuka's personality
This is a good novel with a strong older sister element. Yuuka's older sister power is quite good. The emotional changes are realistically portrayed; Yuuka is a gentle type, and lap pillows are the best. However, an older sister is still a girl, and she can't always be the older sister in front of her younger brother. Occasionally, she has normal girlish reactions and needs to be cared for. This is roughly how her personality is structured as an older sister. Another way to enhance older sister power is for the older sister to be very assertive in public, increasing the younger brother's dependence on her. However, I still suggest continuing to focus on gentleness, as there's relatively little development or description of the older sister's queen-like personality. Adding a personality change in the older sister...
During those months of hiatus, I thought carefully about how to make amends, but... It was impossible. There was nothing I could do; I had to fill the hole I dug myself, little by little. The same applies to loving yourself. The outline is still being written and will need to be updated sooner or later. Try your best to salvage it once, and if it doesn't work, just dig a new hole.
I can only say it's good.
There weren't many typos, and the plot flowed fairly smoothly. The beginning was a bit boring. My personal suggestion is that when designing the female characters, don't be so direct about their overwhelming affection for the male lead. At least give them some backstory or reason. For example, why did the student council president meet the male lead, and why is her affection for him so high? The later parts of the plot were really unwatchable. Is it a plot twist or an accidental overreach in the world-building? It went from a slice-of-life school story to science fiction. Hopefully, the author can salvage the situation later, otherwise, adding science fiction might be a mistake.
Book Realm: The author's masterpiece [Book Realm's Fantasy Catalog] Let me summarize this book: God War, World Destruction, Creation, Apocalypse, Zombies, Superpowers, Ancient Times, Feudalism, Cultivation, Superpowers, Mortals, Destruction of a Nation, Establishment of a Nation, Becoming a God, Having a Child, Leveling Up, God of War, Having a Child, Daily Life. The story spans a vast period of time and features six main characters, breaking down the barrier of single-protagonist novels. Dear author, please don't delete this! I'll like and favorite it for you. I hope we can visit each other's pages, follow each other, and encourage one another.
Author, are you generating this power out of pure love?
I fucking can't understand this at all, it's so damn messed up!
It's so messy!
So I wasn't alone after all...
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