The Good Wife Training Plan

Hmm, the male lead actually made his wife kneel down in front of other people...

This is infuriating to read. The main character is an idiot, and the female supporting character is disgusting. Is it now fashionable to lure people in only to feed them garbage? To hell with rational comments! This is the first book that has ever made me so angry. Never again!

Perhaps my knowledge is insufficient, but the plot feels very chaotic, like it was written down whatever came to mind. However, considering this is the author's first time writing, it's not bad. I suggest reducing the number of supporting characters and plot devices; the author is clearly struggling to manage them. These supporting characters now feel like random grunts in a game—unremarkable and useless, making them hard to remember.

I want to ask, is this female lead some kind of mentally immature adult child? She's not satisfied with the system giving her a thousand a day? Is the system her runaway mother? Please tell me, can the female lead's personality at least become a little more normal later on? It's too off-putting.

The male lead's presence is too weak; despite being the male lead, his screen time is less than that of almost any of the female supporting characters.

I've been reading this novel for a few months now. I really liked the character settings and story at the beginning, and I also thought the female lead's upbringing was quite good. However, after the male and female leads got married, the plot basically became invisible. Almost every two chapters had sex scenes, and even Xiaohuang (a popular Chinese adult novelist) said it wasn't as intense as this one. In short, I personally think this book could have been very well written, but it became increasingly boring as it went on, and I really can't see where the "upbringing" element is anymore.

As someone suffering from severe depression, I enjoy reading novels where the male protagonist is incredibly capable because he alleviates my anxieties and serves as a reason for my existence. He may not love me, and I may not love him, but he will only ever be my one and only. Unfortunately, I'm a guy, and such a person won't exist in reality. I'm surprised to see a female protagonist with similar thoughts to mine (in my opinion), and the sense of identification is too strong; it's making me a little uncomfortable (perhaps it's just part of my NetEase Cloud Music depressive state).

Kexin, with a toddler of about one year old: The three-year period is over. This Lin family! It's better to leave! ... Three years later, Kexin, holding two children: The three-year period is over! This Lin family...

I have a feeling the female lead has some kind of mental problem.

This is very well written! For the author's first attempt at writing, this level of quality is truly remarkable. Writing is not an easy task; I've also tried writing when I was bored, though I only wrote for myself. But that experience made me realize how difficult writing really is. Kudos to the author again! As for the plot, this system is actually somewhat similar to the "super-rich" system, which is really annoying. However, the author has brought a fresh perspective. The author didn't have the protagonist flaunt their wealth everywhere like in those super-rich stories; instead, the protagonist enjoys their wealth discreetly, only to accidentally reveal it later. It's quite enjoyable to read. Although a talking system isn't exactly user-friendly...