On a summer street, a reporter stopped a couple holding hands tightly.
"Hello, would you mind taking part in an interview?"
"Sure." The woman said nothing, while the man smiled and nodded.
"There are single people everywhere these days. Since you've been through it yourselves, could you share some relationship advice?"
"If she runs, you chase her..."
"If you don't like him, run when he chases you," a voice murmured before he could finish.
The man could only smile awkwardly at the interruption, hoist the woman over his shoulder, and earn a howl of protest with a slap.
"Ow! Buy your daughter some formula!"
"As long as you don't tell me, it counts as running away!"
I used to be a virgin, now I'm a mother of two.
After reading more than ten chapters, it's pretty good, but the author's writing style and narrative are a bit chaotic. Sometimes I can't even remember who's talking to whom in dialogue, which is a real headache for me.
Getting up at night, spacing out, itchy hands, double shifts
I've forgotten who the main character is.
Suddenly wanted to stir up trouble
New Year's Day, the New Year, it has to be something different, so let's update twice!
Why does my writing style feel so different from before?
The writing is a bit too disorganized. After reading it, the main character seemed to lack presence. This might be okay for a longer novel, but since the length isn't particularly long, having overly prominent supporting characters is inappropriate.
I... Just like that, it's over?
Dude, please don't make it too angsty, it's sweet!