Taking the Vampire Empress at Launch

I went home for New Year's Day to attend my dad's birthday party and had a few drinks. If I haven't updated on time, it means I was drunk. Sorry. I'm feeling a bit tipsy now.

Is this a fan-made work of that necromancer novel? Or is it a sequel? If it's a fan-made work, please indicate so, thank you. It seems too much like a fan-made work for the following reasons: 1. The beginning is too confusing. As a game-like rebirth novel, the world-building is completely unclear. It's unclear whether the world has merged or if the evil god was already in this world. At the beginning, all I know is that the male lead is going to become a god but doesn't. It wasn't until chapter 19 that I pieced together a little bit of the setting from the text—oh, it seems like the world has merged. 2. There's too little character description. Up to chapter 19, I still don't know what clothes the male and female leads are wearing, how tall they are, what they look like, or what their weapons are like...

First, I want to clarify that I read this book after seeing the new release of *The Undead* (I haven't read the published version yet). I don't usually like to offer suggestions or opinions because it often leads to idle people saying things like, "If you're so good, why don't you do it yourself?" Or "It disrupts the author's writing pace." After all, I'm just a reader, and the author needs to make a living. However, I've still written a few long reviews. Firstly, I believe that even as a reader, I have the right to enjoy the reading experience. Secondly, offering my opinions or suggestions might actually help the author's writing; after all, everything has two sides. Let me start with a brief review of the previous book, *The Undead*, which was decent...

The plot progressed too quickly, causing everything to fall flat. Here are a few points: 1. The main characters are underdeveloped. While Nuomi's status as the group's darling is there, her cuteness is portrayed too little and too stiffly. The group of girls lacks distinct personalities; do they really think a few group chats are enough to establish their characters? Aside from the little fox fairy, the main members of Xueyu are poorly developed. 2. Feixue's personality change and Luna's change of heart require many events to flesh out and enrich the story. Glossing over them in a few strokes is unwise. 3. The plot arrangement is problematic. The protagonist makes vows of eternal love to the female lead in the early chapters. After maxing out her affection, she's just kept at home as a tool? 4. The protagonist isn't a complete newbie; his psychological state after rebirth...

Now that you also have the power to influence Emperor Yan, you need to work harder to update.

Sand God is going to drain the flow.

Fake Vampire: Loli-like body, cute, maid-loving, likes drinking black tea, prone to crouching in fear, likes donuts, magical girl best friend. Real Vampire: 1.95 meters tall, human platinum-like body, gets incredibly high, Jonathan Joestar-loving, likes eating bread, wryyyy, likes road signs and steamrollers, priest best friend.

It's cracked; a cold ruined my chances, so the release date will be postponed to November 21st. Headache, need to keep working on the manuscript, hope my cold gets better soon!

As a reborn character, I lack the aura of a powerful, overpowered protagonist. I seem composed, but it's ultimately useless; I can't show off and lack charisma. Although I know the protagonist is strong, I don't experience the exhilarating feeling of a true overpowered hero when facing major events. I have a vampire wife who is beautiful, invincible, and both charming and arrogant, but her cuteness is glossed over, with little daily interaction. She gets some screen time during her power spike, but later becomes a mere tool for the stronger characters. I know you write about games, but the supporting characters have no charm whatsoever, making the reading increasingly uninteresting. Anyway, keep it up!

Why do I automatically assume that the gleaming "Autumn Competition Bronze Award" is copper from copper smelting?