No One Understands Cultivation Better Than I Do

When I read the introduction, I thought it was written by Trump.

The pacing is terrible, the protagonist is invincible but always arrives late when trouble arises, the harem development is mediocre, and the protagonist's strength is never revealed. That's all I can say; further words are pointless. You'll suffer a loss if you watch it, but you won't if you don't. It's funny, but also incredibly stiff. Can you imagine a protagonist, practically a god, entering the palace with a girl and a little girl, knowing it's a trap, making so many preparations beforehand, only to have the little girl be ambushed on their very first day? They exaggerate the dragon's aura to an incredible degree, spending over ten chapters describing how dangerous it is in the palace. And then, the protagonist, in a fit of rage for a woman, kills her in a few hundred words?? Seriously? That's it? It's incredibly stiff...

Are you going to show me this chapter that I have saved for so long? I thought your writing was good at first. What was behind it?

I would like to ask, will all the big guys come back to the harem in the end? Is there a leak?

The free chapters were alright, with interesting settings and relatively novel plots. Aside from the slightly nonsensical part involving Ji Ruxue, they were all pretty good and really enjoyable. However, the palace arc became somewhat tedious. The protagonist seemed to have hit a brick wall; he knew he was incredibly powerful but was incredibly cowardly. The plot lacked any innovation, all being the same old formula: a few options → choose the easiest → pass. Occasionally, he'd try to show off, but it was incredibly frustrating. It started off well, but later became repetitive and the plot became increasingly weak. A scene that I thought could be glossed over was stretched into a whole chapter. Furthermore...

The male protagonist's harem in this book currently consists of seven people (excluding the little turtle and the cat). I think the biggest issues lie with Ji Ruxue and Leng Qingjue. I consider Ji Ruxue to be my absolute empress; judging from her personality, it's easy to see she's the best among the female protagonists. She is truly devoted to the male protagonist. While she may have initially saved him to stabilize her own Dao heart, she later showed concern for him in every way, even without knowing his abilities, and constantly watched over him. In contrast, Leng Qingjue's initial approach to the male protagonist was malicious; I don't object to her initially appearing as a 'bad guy'...

It's well-written and a comfortable read. However, I think there are still some issues. I'll share my thoughts here as a review. For reference only. In the first volume, the internal logic of each character is generally sound. Whether protagonist or supporting character, their intelligence is consistent, and there's no feeling of plot conflict being forced. Hmm... Very natural. Like Ru Xue's goddess-like demeanor; the little girl's innocence; Si Yunmo's power-first mentality and attitude towards the protagonist; Leng Qingjue's suggestive humor; Xiao Zi's unrequited love; Ru Xue's father's admonition to the protagonist; Leng Qingjue's contrasting personalities (attitude towards the protagonist/...

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Sitting here, it gets increasingly watery. Basically, none of the important plot points are written; it gets more and more padded. Watery plot, watery plot, watery plot, watery sentence structure, watery plot, watery plot. Even the plot is just a collection of water, so it goes. Watery plot, watery plot, watery plot. The water of the entire Pacific Ocean isn't enough for it. I seriously suspect the author is selling filler content? The later parts are so watery; important things aren't mentioned, it's all about daily life. Did you go to school to learn how to be a personal best? You won't stop until you've written tens of thousands of pages. Are you going to keep writing for years to come? La, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la, oh la...

The plot is acceptable from the beginning, but there are a few points I need to address. The female characters appear in a concentrated manner, and aside from Ru Xue, there's not much memorable backstory to embellish them, yet the harem keeps expanding… Focusing solely on character development at the expense of personality feels like putting the cart before the horse. The explanations for some settings are excessively lengthy, often dedicating one or two pages to describing a single setting (even trivial ones)… I personally dislike this and recommend the author use more story and character interactions to develop the world-building. Sometimes the author manages to do this, but after alluding to the world-building, they often add lengthy explanations… More revisions would significantly improve the reading experience…