I Became a Sage, but I Don't Want to Be Bullied by the Demon Princess

The world-building is fantastic, but there's just too little to enjoy!

One point that almost all works of this type struggle to grasp is the degree of torture inflicted on the protagonist. Too much torture turns it into a meaningless cathartic story, devoid of any aesthetic value, and can damage character development, leading to reader dissatisfaction. Too little torture, and it reverts to a conventional story, lacking originality and failing to satisfy readers' needs. This is indeed a difficult aspect to write.

Following the Third Princess is just wife-abuse, I tolerated it. The plot is illogical, the protagonist is clueless, I tolerated that too—after all, I came to see the weak protagonist, to see the First, Second, Third, and Fifth Princesses vying for the protagonist. But what's with this protagonist's thinking? The First Princess is a man disguised as a woman named Jack, and the protagonist mistakenly gets raped by Jack—that's one thing, since he doesn't even check his own body. Without knowing he's the First Princess, why would you later think of eloping with a man? Is that something a lesbian would do? A male friend rapes you, and you still think of his good qualities? With no other way out, you think of eloping with him? Thanks for the invitation, but I'm definitely poisoned by this.

I feel really unwell today, and I can't even read the few thousand words I wrote. I need to rest.

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Ugh, it's so chaotic. The later developments are completely different from what I expected. I don't understand why the author wrote it this way. I personally find it very awkward. The older, second, fourth, and fifth girls don't know the protagonist is female, the protagonist doesn't know the older one is Jack, the senior is the second oldest, and doesn't seem to realize anyone likes her; she thinks everyone is after her. The godmother knows the protagonist is female but doesn't tell anyone else and even tries to get involved, misleading the older one's acting and causing a "war," thus escalating the conflict. I haven't seen any romantic development at all; in fact, there isn't a single well-developed romantic storyline. All I've seen is unrequited love with no happy ending and a web of schemes and misunderstandings...

The author seems to think Morite is being treated too cruelly. From the moment Morite confessed her feelings for the protagonist to the prince, I felt something was amiss. If the story is going to focus on torturing Morite to help the protagonist grow, then I'll just drop the book. This is the first time I've ever spoken out for a character, experiencing the pain of escaping one hell where life and death are controlled by others, only to be plunged into another. That feeling is truly worse than death.

He's always spouting world-changing inventions, but when he encounters that arrogant, useless princess, he acts like a spoiled brat, bastards who says whatever comes to mind. The plot is actually quite interesting, but the character development is a bit off. ...

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