I, a Musclebound Man, Unexpectedly Became a Beautiful Young Officer

Although it's dead, I still want to share my thoughts. When writing a "remarriage-changing" novel, adding other elements doesn't expand the readership; it just creates a clash. This book is an intersection of wuxia and remarriage-changing novels, and few wuxia readers will turn to remarriage-changing novels. From this perspective, remarriage-changing novels must remain primarily remarriage-changing. Any remarriage-changing novel that deviates from the genre's core is not far from being a flop.

The female lead's character is so much cuter than before! And could Banana be the male lead? If so, it gives me this weird feeling that Celery just swapped the male and female leads from her previous book _(:з"∠)_

In this book review, I want to offer some ideas for further development. After all, readers who only complain about the author's poor opening without offering suggestions are scum. Regarding soul transmigration: I can accept it, but I really hate the form of transmigrating into someone else's body and then having memories emerge as they think. It's too simplistic, crude, and feels far-fetched. So I've thought about how to break down this transmigration format. Here are some ideas I've come up with: 1. Simple soul transmigration, with a special identity (how could it be particularly interesting if the identity wasn't special, and it doesn't fit the agrarian society setting), the memories are sealed in the mind, and the protagonist, due to certain prerequisites such as merging with the core during transmigration, can unlock the seal...

It's a pity the free version is better than the later paid chapters. The paid version gets really annoying after chapter 150. Such a good plot and setup, the author writes very well, it's a shame so few people read it. It can't put food on the table, it's all just a matter of passion. I don't know if I'll ever see another work of this caliber from this author again.

The opening is creative, the language is unconventional, and the style is a complete departure from the previous gentle romance between the beautiful woman and the young master, suddenly becoming quite silly. It also effectively develops the initial characters, avoiding the initial lack of characterization of the beautiful woman or the overly dramatic portrayal of the young master. It was a pleasant surprise! Perhaps 2020 is so magical that the author has also become magical? Anyway, this opening has suddenly raised my expectations for the work very high; with a little effort, I think it could reach a 9 out of 10. However, there are also some formulaic parts that left me slightly disappointed. I thought the author had a fresh perspective, but the time-travel element and the subsequent development still fell into clichés...

Tomb sweeping

Holy crap, I was raising it and it died!

Celery's book is a true transformation novel. I've read many transformation novels where the protagonist is always... Weak and submissive, doesn't like women, or is even more beautiful than a woman, and falls for the male lead without any emotional reaction. I have absolutely no interest in that. If that's the case, I'd just read a regular wish-fulfillment novel. Why bother with the transformation? This kind of strong, masculine character, especially one with a wife and daughter, is a true man's transformation. And the fact that he falls for a straight man in the end is what makes it interesting. Plus, the writing isn't vulgar; it doesn't cater to weird fetishes (like loli or yuri). The world-building is also suitable. I hope the author takes care of their health and continues writing this book—and can speed things up without it feeling abrupt...

I found reading most of the chapters about women disguised as men exhausting.

The end? Has this book been completely abandoned...?