The Jianghu Big Shot Becomes a Beauty

I started reading the novel shortly after it began. Honestly, the early chapters were awful; they were so cringeworthy! But that's part of its unique charm, I guess (laughs). The author probably realized this later on, and the story became much smoother. I really like the protagonist, Su He; she's adorably clumsy and very lovable. As for Zheng Yucha, my feelings are different from everyone else's. Everyone says he has a bad personality, and so on, but I think he's alright. Maybe it's because of the protagonist's subjective thoughts that people dislike him; I used to think he was utterly wicked too. But thinking about it carefully, and analyzing it further, Yucha isn't actually...

I found this book decent, but not perfect. As someone nearing 30 in the Pineapple Circle (a popular online community for writing novels), I feel I'm giving it a 9 out of 10, which I think is quite high. The writing felt solid and engaging. However, I'm a bit of a perfectionist and tend to nitpick. The title is rather straightforward, and the writing stays on topic. If the "psychological voice" wasn't in quotes, I would have forgotten the protagonist is mute. Let me point out some minor flaws: 1. I know that a mute protagonist is inherently difficult to write, lacking empathy, because we're used to speaking and not like that kind of person...

"Girl, what's your name?!" "Su He? My name is Bai Buheng..." I almost cried at this point! Bai is such a good person, and our first meeting was just like that saying—"I was here first!"

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Let me rant a bit. Putting aside the writing style, the power level system is seriously inconsistent. Personally, I think the division between "immortal" and "hero" is much better. Otherwise, it's just too much to suddenly have someone who's practicing normal internal energy cultivation suddenly tear through space with their bare hands in the next realm… Also, the combination of Eastern fantasy and Western-style moves like "Ragnarok" feels incredibly jarring… "Heaven and Earth Share the Same Life, Life and Earth Share the Same Heaven"—while the power level system is ultimately up to the author, at least consider the feelings of the average reader! It gives the impression that the author made a mistake early on and then just let it go, continuing down the wrong path. Furthermore, there are too many typos, too many bugs, and…

Well, this book touched the softest and most hidden part of my heart—a timeless and beautiful feeling, yet also fleeting. A good novel doesn't need many outstanding features; it just needs to offer something you're searching for. While some readers might disagree with this, it's certainly true. Finally, I hope the author can make "From Martial Arts Boss to Beauty" even more captivating. Keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

This book teaches us a lesson: simps never get a house.

Did the female lead in this book have a baby? I'll read it if she does.

The beginning of this book was practically perfect; the plot and character development were natural and original. As a five-year avid reader, I thoroughly enjoyed it. However... Once the term "Ragnarok" appeared, it started to feel jarring. Even though I tried hard to pull myself back into the wuxia genre, the various overly dramatic and cheesy terms made it difficult to immerse myself in the story. Also, if I had to summarize the background in one sentence, it would be: You think this is wuxia, but it's actually xianxia! From the prologue, it seems the author wants everyone to have extraordinary adventures, meaning the protagonist isn't supposed to be overly powerful. But could you please stop giving me this feeling of...

I gave it a 7 out of 10. I think this score is just right for this work, it can't be any higher. Another reason is that as a reader, I don't have any ill will towards any author who perseveres to finish a work, and I also hope that the author's future works will improve. This review is mainly about criticism and suggestions, and contains subjective factors, so if there are any disagreements, you are absolutely right. Although the content and main plot of this book are complete and intact, its flaws are also extremely obvious and typical. First of all, the writing style is not delicate, sometimes bland, sometimes rough, and sometimes humorous. You can clearly feel the author struggling while writing...