Tricked into Becoming Pink-Haired in the Apocalypse, I Still Struggle to Survive

To be honest (not really), when I saw "Horror Game Turns into Lolita" (the first book), I was actually very happy because I loved the atmosphere (rival becomes wife). However, after handling the conflict between Yu Lin and Mu Shen well in the early stages, the middle part became rather bland. This is because the emotional fluctuations couldn't replace the emotional excitement brought by the plot's twists. Our emphasis on pacing is about finding the balance between the reader's curiosity about the unknown plot and the known outcomes and the novel's intended message. Of course, I must say that book wasn't handled well, resulting in a rushed ending. But (emphasis added) I subscribed to the entire book and read...

The premise is decent, roughly a post-apocalyptic remarriage scenario? The detailed descriptions are good, but the writing style could be slightly lacking. A suggestion: reduce the amount of repetition of descriptions like "tilting head," "covering face," and "pouting" within a single chapter; too much repetition can feel awkward. The transition to the post-apocalyptic phase might feel a bit abrupt; some foreshadowing could be added. The main focus seems to be on the remarriage romance, which could be more nuanced. Also, I personally suggest keeping the main character's party around four people, with a good male-to-female ratio. Having other characters as couples is fine, but I don't recommend overly intimate relationships between the main characters and the female lead.

Please, please give me back my money, waaaaah!

Wait, seriously? It's been a year and you haven't updated at all?!

Why don't you just stop writing and delete it? Sit-ups are really annoying.

I heard the author passed away while I was visiting the grave. Is that true?

Wow, I wrote a review of several hundred words, and it's in the short comments section... I can't even copy and paste long reviews here... Anyway, to sum it up, I really like the subject matter; I think it's all very novel. I especially like it, but the writing is really lacking. If the writing were better, you'd see someone throwing money at it dozens of times. The author's imagination matches my taste, but I don't know if it's a lack of expression or what, the climax isn't very good (at least for me). If you can write something that I really enjoy the plot, then I'll throw money at it dozens of times (of course, this is someone else's account; I'll ask for their opinion before buying some chapters, and if it's attractive enough, then I'll...).

In 2024, scan Xiaolingqi

I came to do archaeological work in 2023. This tomb is quite nice; let's dig it up.

Refund