What Should I Do After Turning Into a Girl in a Horror Game?

It's not that I'm not updating; I'm going to Japan soon, and time is tight. If I'm late, the tour guide will abandon me and I'll be an orphan! But don't worry, it'll be over in just a few chapters, I'll definitely finish writing it.

First of all, I haven't finished reading it, so my comments may have many inaccuracies, please forgive me. To be honest, after reading so many books over the years, I'm basically sick of tropes now, so I personally can't accept many of them. Although I'm a staunch supporter of female characters getting married, many of the reverse marriage tropes really make me waver, and I'm even considering reading BL (Boys' Love). I've criticized the author's writing style in the novel. Because I've tried writing it myself, I can say very clearly: lengthy descriptions of the female lead's appearance are absolutely a no-no, and should be avoided as much as possible. Many scene descriptions can be glossed over, unless it's to create atmosphere. Of course, I'm not saying the author...

When I was a child, The delay was even shorter, just one day. I was on Saturday. Updated on Sunday. When they grow up, The week was even more silent. During this week, Update will be next week. Now, Delay is a knife in my hand. I'm outside the door. My younger brother is inside the door. The future The drag is an iron fence I'm in prison Yingdi is in the sky

Let me explain: since we're nearing the end, I'm thinking about how to develop the plot. Don't worry, the book will definitely be finished.

First, let me give you a gentlemanly smile, hehehehe. If you don't think gender-swap characters are great, you don't need to read this review (what I mean is, gender-swap characters are amazing! I love them!! I love everything about them!). I'm very grateful to the author for writing such a captivating book and for keeping me hooked. Thumbs up! Next, I'll briefly share a few of my thoughts: 1. The way the book is written world by world reminds me of "This QQ Group…" (if you've read it, you'll know what I mean) which is also updated on Pineapple Bun. I wonder if the author read this book beforehand and was inspired by it (it's also a great book…).

Dear author, please avoid frequently using descriptions reminiscent of anime/manga, especially regarding the protagonist's inner thoughts. Give the protagonist's psychological transformation a longer, more complex process. What is Xiaobai referring to? It's that kind of overly weak and unconvincing character portrayal. I don't know if you enjoy reading Japanese light novels, but I personally recommend against trying to emulate them, especially the seemingly popular ones like "That Time I Got Reincarnated as a Slime." The character development is genuinely poor. If you truly want to create a well-developed, vibrant, and engaging character, find some well-received romance novels and learn from them...

The first volume was really good...

I thought this book was going to be millions of words long! The early plot was incredibly slow, how did it end after only a few worlds?! Author, please sell me the rights to this book, I want to continue writing it!

The essence of humanity is...

Honestly, to keep reading this book, you really need to be on the same wavelength... Let's start with the beginning. I completely agree with some of the comments in the first long review. The protagonist's failure to save Meng Tian disappointed her, and I honestly don't understand his thought process. It's just a game... Where did the "flicker of doubt and sadness in Meng Tian's big, watery eyes" come from? I really can't understand it. Isn't this method of creating a rift a bit too forced? Mu Shen's constant attempts to steal other people's girlfriends already gave me a bad first impression, and then his formal appearance—that frivolous man—made it impossible for me to like him. If he were a masculine...