I'm Not the Abyss Dragon Princess's Beloved Heir, I'm the King of Medicine

They switched to a rear-projection TV so quickly.

I think the theme of this book is the female protagonist lying in bed saying to the male protagonist: Come on, let's fuck your mother!

I'm not a hardcore gamer, I'm not number one...

After reading it once, it's so-so, an overall passable score. It's readable, but the plot feels forced, incorporating many common elements without properly handling the relationships between them, resulting in a chaotic feel. Despite having a system, it feels like other settings were forcibly crammed in to emphasize that it's not your average system novel. The plot development is somewhat dragging, especially the first few dozen chapters, which feel like the outline wasn't properly established, taking too many chapters to get to the main storyline. The male lead's character development is not compelling enough and has obvious room for improvement.

The author hopes to receive some feedback. Our story falls into the harem/reverse romance genre, and the descriptions of each chapter shouldn't be rushed. The reader's writing in this area is excellent, but the author could elaborate on the scenes of the heroines' or hero's encounters, such as their daily lives. Also, many people are hesitant to write harem stories with too many heroines, and the reader has handled this well. However, we hope our story can explore more diverse heroines. I once wrote a harem story, but it hasn't been published yet. I basically divided it into three to five parts action and daily life, with the remaining two parts storytelling and other elements. Regarding the number of heroines...

The protagonist's character has always been confusing. At first, I thought he was a brother who cared about his sister, but after the revenge he suffered, I saw his extreme side. I wasn't disgusted by his vengeful nature, but later, when the wolf told him the dragon was incubating eggs and warned him not to go, he insisted on seeing the dragon, seemingly completely unconcerned about the impact on her. Then I saw his selfishness. And then there were the two butterfly spirits; the protagonist went berserk while being chased by him? We always say that our territory cannot be invaded, yet this person trespassed into their home and threatened their mother. Even without hatred, the butterfly spirits had no reason not to kill him. Did the Japanese aircraft carrier invade us...?

I haven't read the later volumes yet, only the first one. This is just my opinion based on the first volume, and I hope you won't rush me to read the later volumes and say they're better. I couldn't resist after reading the first volume. First, let's ignore the typos; they don't really affect reading much. The problem is that one sentence is repeated twice, with some modifiers added. It feels very verbose and cumbersome. Also, remember to label it as a harem story; the male lead's personality is like that. Anyway, I was disgusted. He starts by saying he'd risk his life to save his sister, but then he dies for a woman he just met. Then he entrusts his sister and others to someone who's practically a stranger. And the part about sleeping with the wolf queen... I'm speechless...

FoggyMoon is still serializing this book! (Surprised!)

I've only read the first few chapters, and the plot feels very awkward to me. He repeatedly risks his life to save his enemy, yet he says he doesn't want her to die easily. Isn't that contradictory? Isn't that laughable? It's really hard to understand... He's not a child. It's said that he has lived two lives. Would he still be so immature? It doesn't make sense. Saying he wants revenge and risks his life to save and take care of her multiple times doesn't make any sense.

The storyline underground in the abyss was decent, but the problem lies in the part after emerging from it. Worried about his sister and wanting to get back, he needed a powerful mount, so why not capture one after leaving the abyss? (Dragon's Might makes taming much easier.) Okay, let's say you weren't so meticulous and didn't think of that at the time. That's fine too, you have a storage ring, right? So much money and you can't even clear a path? It's supposed to be in a neighboring country, but it's the border! A big sword in one hand and gold coins in the other and you can't clear a path?! And after emerging from the abyss, you still have the nerve to pretend to be a bandit...