Fanning the Secrets of Heaven

I initially wanted to offer some words of comfort, but after reading the work, I felt compelled to speak up. I think the author is very persevering and hopeful; they are undeniably a person of great determination. However, this book doesn't quite live up to the author's efforts. The main issues are the plot and writing style. The plot was difficult to understand. While it incorporated many brilliant poetic lines and elegant phrases, the transitions between sentences were noticeably awkward. For example, phrases like "but... Therefore..." And "then..." Often lacked clear objects, and the overall flow was disjointed. The author clearly intended to write well, which I could see, but the lack of layout and plot coherence is a significant drawback. Writing a novel isn't just about the author...

The days and nights are long as I drift on the water, the wind is strong and the boat is tossed about. The small boat has passed by, and I am unharmed that the Peach Blossom Spring is nowhere to be seen.

Clouds on the horizon, water on the bridge, wind blows the sun and moon to worship the heart's tenderness, all things are but empty illusions, rain falls on earth and fire flickers.

The author is really impressive to be able to write 800,000 words just from getting likes and favorites; it must be something they write as a hobby.

Come as you please, go as you please. I believe there are no constraints between heaven and earth. I will ride the wind and waves, and freedom is paramount. All sorts of thoughts, if forced to be pondered, are unwise. Now I feel that I should return to the ultimate Yang and seek a pure Yang body.

All my books will inevitably be finished, perhaps due to my own thoughts and obsessions! My books will no longer be written for profit, but I won't turn down money either. How to put it? Consider it a gift from a young person to an old one. I must say, this industry is extremely difficult, and I have no ambition. Starting next week, I'll update twice a week as a basic requirement, with each chapter at least 2,000 words, usually around 3,000. This book review is for myself; it's not that I'm going crazy, just a reminder to myself! That's all I'll say!

I just can't muster the motivation or desire. Otherwise, I could have wasted enough time to finish revising the book. It's really just laziness acting up, my heart is heavy with low spirits, and there's nothing to persevere in. I'm not persisting in writing anymore; I just want to finish what I've written. If I can finish writing it like this, it might be a sense of accomplishment. First, let's cultivate some drive; without enough ambition, progress is too slow.

There might not be any updates today.

I wanted to add you to the group, but I couldn't send the message, so never mind. I came here on the recommendation of a group member. We can explain and answer your questions about why it's not getting much attention. If you want to join the group to see the comments section of my books, everyone here is an author and we can discuss things together.

And to become a madman is not to live a life of madness, but to be a great demon who turns the world upside down. Stirring up winds and waves, the boat rises, laughing wildly like a god, scornful like a mad Buddha.