I Refuse to Become Some Kind of Mage in Another World

I'm not reading anymore, I really can't stand it! Criticize me if you want, it's all up to you, maybe it's just a matter of personal taste! But the author really has so many poorly written details. The plot holes in the Demon Emperor storyline are still unexplained, it's all so confusing, it would have been better not to write that storyline at all. Besides, as the saying goes: "To forge iron, one must be strong oneself." No matter how rich your theoretical knowledge is, if you're not strong yourself, just giving pointers won't earn you respect. But the protagonist's disciples, these prodigies, are so obedient to him, which is illogical in reality. Now the protagonist has left the Moon Worship Empire, so many people want to kill him, and he just...

Everything else is fine, but the Demon Emperor's storyline is poorly written. First, the background prioritizes strength above all else. Why would a top-tier Demon Emperor fear someone far weaker than her? Second, she's an emperor; what wise ruler would fear their subordinates? If she declared she would protect the protagonist and that anyone who dared touch him, regardless of who they were, would die, I don't know which minister would be foolish enough to go against an emperor. Furthermore, how much impact would an emperor's marriage have on the country? As long as the fiancé's strength doesn't reach the Demon Emperor's level, the impact wouldn't be significant. Regarding the romance, it's important to understand that the Demon Emperor doesn't have an omniscient perspective; she only knows the protagonist has amnesia, not...

Regarding Zhongli Henzhu's relationship with Shangguan Hao, the author likely intended to express a complex emotion: a desire to be close yet a fear of losing him again, so she simply wants him by her side regardless of who he loves. However, this portrayal is poorly executed, leading many to perceive her as ungrateful—a major flaw in the writing. In reality, Zhongli Henzhu is not ungrateful; the author's character development is inadequate, coupled with her initially cold demeanor upon meeting Shangguan Hao. Furthermore, the author's portrayal of her feelings for Bailang Wudi is limited to fleeting memories of the past (and even those memories are...).

I've read many novels on Pineapple Bun, and abandoned many because they didn't suit my taste. This book, however, is one I find very engaging; few books have kept me reading until they were officially released (I'm poor, after all). Late at night, I didn't want to sleep, so I read some reviews and found that people are still criticizing the Demon Emperor. Here are two points I hope readers will pay attention to: First, don't skip around while reading. A lot of information is missed when you skip, including foreshadowing and key points. Reading like this will only make you feel like you're reading a nonsensical novel. Second, be able to make necessary...

I have to say, the Demon Emperor's characterization is incredibly disappointing. A man who lost everything for you—you don't deserve his sacrifice? In a world where strength reigns supreme, you're threatened by your subordinates? They want to kill your husband? What kind of Demon Emperor is this? And you were actually threatened, brazenly claiming it was for the male lead's sake, for his safety, that you distanced yourself from him. That's it? Look at the other story (What's it like marrying the Demon Emperor?). Didn't the female lead also marry a mortal? Did her subordinates dare object? They were killed on the spot. Someone relying on the power of the supreme ruler—you dare say a word? It's truly laughable. What about the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors? They still lacked real authority. And...

I couldn't sleep last night and suddenly thought of this book, so I decided to write a review. I started reading it because of a recommendation from Pineapple Bun; I stumbled upon it, found it appealing, and started following it, and it's been going on ever since. I remember at the beginning, Sister Liu was the main character, and the Cult Leader hadn't appeared yet. Back then, many people were captivated by the author's delicate portrayal of emotions, the well-developed world-building, and the intelligent characterization of all the characters. But later, with the Cult Leader's appearance, factional disputes arose, and the comment section was filled with daily battles, with some even starting to criticize the author. But in my opinion, Sister Fairy is indeed very good, but the Demon Emperor is no less impressive, responsible...

Personally, I think Zhongli Henzhu's character design is perfectly fine. Firstly, the Baiyue Empire inherently reveres martial prowess, so the protagonist's sudden loss of martial arts skills under such cultural influence is understandably disheartening, given the potentially devastating impact of such a culture. However, this is only a secondary reason. The protagonist has lost his memory and remembers nothing related to her. Some might argue that this doesn't prevent her from loving him, but since he's fallen for Liu Yuehan, she faces a choice. She can choose not to compete with Liu Yuehan, at least ensuring the protagonist's happiness, or she can choose to continue loving him as before, but the protagonist's feelings might not be the same...

The author's emotional descriptions and details are just too bland and ordinary, making for a dull and uninteresting read. While this is supposed to be a farming/developmental novel, I still hope the author will pay more attention to detail. Perhaps it's not appropriate to mention other authors here, but if the author doesn't understand detailed and emotional descriptions, I suggest they learn from Xueyan Tianzhao's books. Her character portrayals and emotional descriptions are excellent. Although the romance in her books isn't very sweet, the angst she delivers is definitely sharp. If you can't write sweet things, can't you switch to angst?! Your writing is so bland!

Being stuck at home, I've been frantically searching for novels to read, reaching a point of complete reading slump. I was looking for high-quality reads everywhere, and this one only caught my eye because of its impressive number of favorites. However, in my personal opinion, this novel, and the author's previous work, are somewhat overrated. This might be offensive to the author, but it's just my personal feeling. Both novels have somewhat formulaic plots, the writing is a bit immature, and there are numerous flaws in my opinion. I wonder if the author intentionally tried to speed up the plot, but seemed to lose control, resulting in a somewhat rambling narrative. However, I think there's a reason why both novels have such a high number of favorites...

"Love is not about possession." I think this is Zhong Li's current thought. Since my love for you will only bring you misfortune, I can only keep it safe, store it away, and hide it away (Zhong Li believes that her destiny is thorny, and she has hurt or even killed those around her countless times). I only wish you well, and that you fly towards the ends of happiness. Please forget about me; I am still alone. Actually, I don't understand why so many people can't understand Zhong Li's views on love, or maybe I'm just getting old (?).