I Won't Be Conquered

I was immediately drawn to this novel by its genre and title: "I Won't Be Captured!" It's a yuri story, and a gender-swapped one at that! It's definitely a story of a gender-swapped protagonist being captured by an older woman—I had to check this out! At first, it was a bit bland and easy to read, which is fine, but I like these kinds of lighthearted novels. Just when I thought it was a typical story of a useless guy transmigrating into a beautiful girl and being captured by a powerful older woman, it turned out to be a story of a useless guy transmigrating into a genius girl and becoming rich with the help of a powerful princess. Just when I thought the heroine would be forcefully taken advantage of by the princess after becoming rich, our heroine becomes increasingly assertive and dominant, while the princess becomes increasingly...

Well, how should I put it? My mindset towards this novel was like this: Wow, gender-swapped yuri or harem? Needless to say, I had to read it. (ಡωಡ) So I clicked in without hesitation. A few chapters later, it was alright, but the family relationships were a bit strange. Was this a huge plot hole? I'll wait for it to be filled. A few more chapters later, they were at school. Great university, it must be paradise! And princesses and imperial concubines... Awesome! A few more chapters, wait, the female lead is learning programming! Is programming that easy to learn? Oh well, I'll just take it as the protagonist's halo. A few more chapters later, okay, she's starting a company! A true powerhouse! But is this company really that good...?

I have to complain about this book, "I Won't Be Captured." I've read 70 chapters already, and it feels a bit off-topic. Why don't you actually get captured? There's hardly any daily life or interaction; it's all about businesses. I came here to read a novel, not to learn about businesses.

So sleepy, just typing a few words. The collaborator's style seems a bit different from before, but it's still quite interesting. I've read similar works before, like "I Transmigrated into the Lolita Beauty Chitanda's Super Difficult Survival Guide," which the author might want to check out if they have time. Its descriptions of daily life are far superior to the former and this book. Commercially, they each have their own merits. I'm going to sleep now. (Zz ...

First, I personally prefer reading carefully, word by word. The author wrote a business novel, which could have been a dry, money-making story, but instead, the protagonist's success in business was portrayed with remarkable ease. The author did a great job of writing this, truly hooking me. To clarify, the majority of the novel revolves around making money—almost 70% of it—but I didn't find the process boring at all. I read it word by word, finishing 300 chapters in two days. Secondly, the author's unconventional approach successfully piqued my interest. A few songs, poems, and famous quotes brought the protagonist a sense of satisfaction from being the center of attention (which I enjoyed reading). However, the author didn't rely on this tactic consistently, so...

A mere chronicle of events? The author isn't putting their heart into it; it's like watching a primary school student do homework. I've only read 24 chapters, but the beginning is where the real reader engagement happens. This kind of rambling makes readers uncomfortable, even sleepy, and the book won't become popular. I feel you need to add more plot and a main storyline; otherwise, without a main plot, it's hard to understand what you're writing about. You also need to change your writing style; it's too rigid, a monotonous three-point line: reading, programming, eating, vacationing. That's how we live our own lives; it makes us lose the motivation to keep reading.

Rouge, you know what I mean. Buy Audrey stock for 100,000.

The setting is novel and interesting (I found it quite enjoyable anyway). The characters are well-developed, and the psychological changes of the protagonist and supporting characters are quite engaging. The plot is fast-paced, coherent, and well-balanced; I could read 180 chapters in one go without getting out of breath. Some readers might find certain parts exaggerated and be hesitant, but this is a novel, based on reality yet transcending it. I hope the style doesn't change too much later on; I find this style quite enjoyable.

I want to complain. I didn't come here to learn about development; I came to read novels. Why are most of the stories about starting a business? There's not much interaction or daily life.

I'm so tired of seeing so much money being made.