I'm Actually a Sword Immortal, Despite Being a Noble Lady

Honestly, this book is really good. The plot and writing are fine. 190,000 words shouldn't have so few favorites. I'd like to talk about some factors that might have contributed to this. These are just my humble suggestions for your reference: 1. The title might not be popular on SF (a Chinese online literature platform). 2. As a yuri (lesbian) novel, the plot has some problematic elements; the protagonist gets kissed by a man. 3. It's been a long time since I've seen a yuri novel where the protagonist is conflicted about being female and wants to turn back into a male. This might not be appealing to some yuri fans. Regarding point 1, the author probably knows what's going on with the title, given the typical Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) naming convention. Regarding point 2, I hope the author will revise it and not be vague. Regarding point 3, as long as the male protagonist doesn't turn back into a male, I hope this point isn't...

I don't have much to say. I'm posting this here mainly so the author can see it more easily. Author, I suggest you write some side stories, preferably about the protagonist's experiences, at least explaining why the protagonist is such a jerk ("). Because so far, I feel the protagonist is a bit too much of a jerk, and also very arrogant. One thing is not good, and the other is inappropriate. In reality, unless someone has incredible luck, I think such a person would have already paid the price for their arrogance and shamelessness. Of course, this is just my personal opinion for reference only.

I failed the civil service exam, sent my application home, and came back to write novels.

I probably won't have much time to update this week. I have a lot of classes and exams, it's tough.

I think it's very good. This is the kind of adventure novel I've been looking for. The protagonist's journey and adventures, gradually revealing the true main plot along the way, is fantastic! I also really like the protagonist's personality; his inaction is key—he does what he should do when he should do it, which is very endearing. The adventures are generally well-written, but each journey is a bit short, so it feels somewhat lacking in detail. If possible, adding a few more words to each chapter and adding more details would be even better. Reading this novel reminded me a bit of playing Falcom's Ys series; I miss that feeling of adventure. I hope the main plot isn't rushed but rather full of twists and turns...

Overall, the writing is quite good, but the first volume felt toxic to me. The way the characters are addressed remained unchanged, and the use of "he" instead of "she" for women was jarring. The first volume kept emphasizing that she was Luo Quan, but the real Luo Quan died eight years ago at the cliff edge; she's now just a ten-year-old girl. From the moment she was reborn, she was no longer the "he" she once was. Although she has memories of the past, she is Mia, and that's undeniable. The protagonist can't deny herself just because she feels she's a reincarnated person with past memories. Mia...

I'm wondering if it will revert back later. Can someone please let me know (preferably not) if I've been poisoned and paralyzed?

Summer vacation has started, so I need to update.

I've been cramming lately and it's really tiring. Let me rest for another day...

The protagonist's ambiguous, decisive, and free-spirited nature is well-developed, making for a very enjoyable read. I need to find a way to train the author into a word-writing machine.