A Journey Before the World's End

A true yandere is someone who appears gentle and kind on the surface, but secretly destroys all your relationships, eliminates everything that supports you, cuts off your financial resources, and extinguishes your emotional support, all without making you notice that she did it. Finally, with the gentlest smile, she says to you, who has lost everything except her, "It's okay, you still have me!"

The writing is above average, and the plot is above average. However, after reading dozens of chapters, I can sum it up in one word—chaotic. The information laid out in the early chapters is too vast and complex, requiring careful sorting. This is quite fatal for a long online novel. After all, not everyone reads carefully, paragraph by paragraph. For those who read quickly, it's easy to get confused. For example, me (awkward). Furthermore, the frequent shifts in perspective and sudden interludes in the early chapters left me feeling—impressed but confused. It would be fine if it were third-person, but it's first-person. I suggest the author avoid presenting so much information all at once in the early chapters...

You are my only one, but I am just one of yours.

There are too many interludes. Wouldn't it be better to treat them as regular chapters, like chapter xx? It disrupts the flow of the story.

I'd like to ask if it's a pure love story or a story about a woman who has been cheated on? I'm a little afraid it's a story about a woman who has been cheated on and I'm hesitant to read it.

The author has been using firearms for over a week.

Go for it! ^0^~

I'm a little confused, but it's quite interesting.

Please take another day off; today is my day off.

Request for leave