The Beautiful Disciple Girls' Life in Another World

Don't look, don't order, it's embarrassing.

Chapter 39 was really hard to bear. Putting aside the awkwardness of the protagonist's swagger, the plot of chapter 39 was just unbearable. The original owner was a genius who showed his talent at the age of 12, rising steadily through the ranks, basically destined for greatness. Then a scandal occurred, a fatal one. The result was predictable: his supporters scattered, everyone turned against him, and the original owner was devastated, even being drugged and killed. Then what did his mentor do? One of the seven royal pharmacists, he said he had no intention of helping, that this was a test for him, and if he couldn't overcome it independently, then he was simply a failure. And then, because of the original owner...

If the author really can't write it, they should use AI; it should be much better than what you're writing now.

The personalities of the other characters are relatively acceptable, but this little princess is utterly useless. She has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. If you're going to write it like this, you shouldn't have made her a main character. Did you really put so much effort into developing this character just to be a foil for Merlin? The most interesting characters are the dragon loli-lover and the spirit loli. Merlin's screen time is far too little. Giving so much screen time to the princess, who's portrayed as useless, is very uncomfortable to watch. At least give her some positive characterization. So far, besides being willful and cowardly, I haven't seen any other redeeming qualities, and her judgment is extremely poor…

The initial settings are all contradictory; anyone with a modicum of intelligence would find them jarring and nauseating. Try reading the first 100 chapters yourself. If you're going to pad the word count, at least charge for it! Who's going to read this? Isn't this just disgusting? I usually don't comment on disgusting things. It's a shame to ruin a good story. Is this all there is to the "invincible protagonist" label? Is this all? And you have to write 140 characters for a long review? So many punctuation marks, please bear with me.

If this book is about pedophilia, then I will not hesitate to give the author a huge slap on the shoulder. No one can stop the author from pedophilia, because he is ignorant of the law.

The protagonist is arguably the weakest Mahayana-stage Earth Immortal. He's supposed to be a Mahayana-stage expert, so how could he deplete his true essence with just one sword strike? I remember when he was in the Tribulation stage, he could easily unleash countless sword strikes with the sword he forged. How could his true essence be drained with just one strike after advancing to the Mahayana stage? Even if he was a little weak after the advancement, he should still be stronger than during his Tribulation stage. Furthermore, since a Mahayana-stage cultivator is called an Earth Immortal, they should at least have the strength to break through star levels. How could they be severely injured from falling tens of thousands of meters in the air? They dare call themselves Earth Immortals? I disagree with the author's character design.

The male lead's character is really unbearable to watch.

This is the most mediocre novel I've read this year. Goodbye.

Maybe I would have been willing to patiently read it 12 or 13 years ago, but now, I just think of her as a hypocrite. But writing a book isn't easy, so I'll give it a like and leave.