The Leisurely Life and Adventures of a Goddess Princess

I've read the first two chapters. There are a few typos; I'll pay more attention when writing. The language is unclear. The colon is a crucial punctuation mark, but throughout the chapter, it's difficult to find colons before long passages of speech. This directly leads to a problem: it's hard to immediately understand who is speaking. You might need to carefully read the context to understand, which will frustrate fast readers. They might only spend four or five seconds reading a page in other books, but here they need to stare intently for ten seconds. Similarly, the characters' names are hard to remember. Most Western fantasy...

Let's give it a quick 10 and start our book review! I've already pointed out most of the book's shortcomings in the short review; this longer review will mainly supplement some of the strengths and weaknesses. First, the book's strengths... Eh? I really can't find any strengths in this book! Haha, just kidding! 1. The book's premise is quite good: a princess transformed into a god, and the earlier text introduces the gods as the rulers of all races, indirectly showcasing the protagonist's incredibly powerful background, which is likely to please the reader. However, the author didn't fully utilize this strength; that is, the background didn't effectively differentiate the protagonist from others. 2. Xing Shen Jiang's writing...

It's alright overall, but typos and punctuation need correction. The language shouldn't be too direct. More exposition and more ornate language would be more appealing, but avoid excessive embellishment which can make it seem superficial. Add transitional sentences where the text connects to the surrounding text to ensure clarity and understanding. The writing style may not be perfect. However, as a new author, I appreciate your support and guidance. Thank you, dear readers.

The book is excellent (in my opinion), and the author put in a lot of effort. Overall, I'd definitely give it a 20 out of 10. However, the author's ability to pad the word count is too strong. The beginning was okay, but there are a couple of chapters later on that require reading word for word, which is like reading them twice. The author needs to fix this. Also, author, please pay attention to this. Furthermore, there are too many typos, which must be corrected. As someone with OCD, seeing typos is very frustrating. But overall, it definitely deserves a 10 out of 10.

Holy crap, it's already 2021, and the author stopped updating in 2019. Why are so many good stories abandoned?

I'd like to ask, does the author update annually?

I remembered I was going to add an extra chapter, but something came up, so I'll have to make it up to you tomorrow.

Holy crap, they skipped it?

Tomorrow… wait, I'll update tonight. I was thinking I'd finally finished with school stuff, but then something else came up last night, so I can only update tonight. I also remember the extra chapter requested by the big boss. Anyway, sorry for the past few days.

One book published, two books delayed – author, you're very clever.