The Amazing Adventures of a Transformed Mechanical Girl in Another World

Succubus Writer (✘) Author's Autobiography (✔)

First, let me share my thoughts on the three main characters in the book. Alina, frankly, I didn't like her at first. She was selfish, arrogant, looked down on others, and liked to scheme, even drugging women. But later, we learned about her past, her perseverance, her kindness, and her beliefs. Eventually, I gradually stopped disliking her and even came to like her, hoping she would have a happy ending (having ten children with the blond guy!). Ai AA, the second female lead, is a saintly character—either outwardly virtuous or inwardly overly so. She might be a bit self-willed, but her intentions are good, although the process might be...

The latest chapter evoked my emotions. These nobles should be thankful that no one sang that song, no one issued that call to battle—otherwise, they would have ended up like the kings and nobles of the 1917 revolution on Earth, their heads falling to the ground and then kicked into a cesspool. Yes, the corrupt and backward nobles never treated commoners as human beings. Even when they sang, even when they painted, even when they had their own lives, as long as they could live "forever and ever," what did the death of commoners mean to them? The nobles looked at the commoners like they were looking at a loaf of bread, ignoring their cries...

I'm just an average reader who recently caught up with the updates, and my writing skills are limited, so I don't think I can write a high-quality review. However, I have my own writing experience and understand how important feedback from readers—especially casual fans—is to an author. Therefore, I'm leaving this review in the hope that it will be helpful to Ms. Lan Yubian's writing. In conclusion, I think this work is very good. Here, I have to complain about SF's rating system; the ten-star rating is really unrealistic. I don't think many average readers can summarize a clear and logical ten-point rating system. In fact, most...

Aside from the male and female leads, the character development is excellent. However, towards the middle, you'll find the male and female leads doing many ridiculously silly things, then suddenly they show off their intelligence towards the end, pretending the earlier chapters were just for fun and they're only now getting serious. Honestly, I feel like the earlier chapters were pointless; I could have just skipped to the ending. Because if you look closely at the female lead's problem-solving perspective, you'll find she's completely bizarre, even bordering on a sadistic tale. Both the male and female leads are constantly cheating on each other, and no matter what the male lead does, the female leads eventually become infatuated with him (it's okay at first, but by the end it's practically forced). The female lead is...

Unsurprisingly, it's another one. Trying to skirt the issue, wanting to whiten and change the price, pulling back and forth—it's purely disgusting.

Having read the latest chapter, I can say that Alina is indeed selfish. However, as the latest chapter describes, it's also true that she helped Flo grow. Flo is kind, but also cowardly, and even somewhat ignorant. It was Alina who repeatedly pushed him forward and comforted him. I believe love should be about loyalty to the other person. However, from the beginning, Alina was portrayed as someone who likes women and is lustful; her harem and maids are already manifestations of her character. Therefore, she is currently unaware of loyalty and her affection for Flo. And Flo, so foolish and stubborn, managed to resist Alina's physical temptations through sheer willpower...

The whole book follows the same formula: questioning and then being proven wrong. That's fine. But when the supporting characters are repeatedly proven wrong, and it's still, "Impossible, you simply can't do it," it's really frustrating to read. And no matter what the protagonist does, his reputation is always bad.

I really love the author's style; a female character who transforms should appeal to both men and women!

This isn't like having a car wheel running over your face; it's like enjoying it right under a rocket!