Chronicles of the Divine Princess's War

1. Numerous typos. 2. Lack of basic military equipment knowledge. For mass-produced military equipment, to say it's damaged by a 50kg object, no more than 5 meters above the ground, with negligible hardness, without preheating, is absurd. The designer should be executed. Even if it's damaged, you could say it's a structural problem, or at most, shoddy workmanship. But for it to malfunction after a single impact, causing problems with its energy output circuitry, is absurd. 3. Lack of basic military knowledge: "An army marches on its stomach." A sizable team of wargirls setting out to defend a city without basic equipment, logistics, and maintenance personnel...

I just finished reading the second volume of this book. Putting the first volume aside, the second volume was truly a painful read! Each chapter is filled with too much rambling and little substantial content. I'm supposed to be reading for the plot, but why is 40% of this chapter just background description? 😓 The scenes of intrigue and power struggles are described too awkwardly. It makes you want to keep flipping through and skipping. The protagonist's screen time is also too short, and parts that shouldn't be skipped are skipped, like the section on the leg armor physical fitness test jumping straight to the vacation???? There's absolutely no progress or anything like that 😭 The first volume was entirely focused on the protagonist, so why, in the second volume, when the protagonist is supposed to get stronger...

I think this novel has many shortcomings. The writing style is too literary, not like a martial arts novel or the overly polite style of a novel by author Tudou. It's so literary that it feels unrealistic. This isn't about the content, but rather the language's lack of connection to everyday life. As for the setting, it's set in feudal society, which means it should be after the Second Industrial Revolution, the electrical age. The technology at that time was incredibly backward, but the woman possesses technology far beyond modern times, leading to a "Mary Sue" (overpowered protagonist) plot where she's invincible and easily defeats everyone. There are already far too many books with this "Mary Sue" trope. I think this historical fantasy novel has great potential, and I hope the writing style can be improved...

I've also read other historical novels on SF (a Chinese online forum), but they're either too exaggerated or game-like. This one, set in an alternate world, has similarities to historical events but also differences. The protagonist's identity feels natural, and the beginning is mostly everyday life. The climax comes with the massacre and transformation, but then the school setting gets a bit confusing. Later, with the addition of an army and a research institute, it feels like a farming novel. There are war strategies, but they don't seem to be directly related to the protagonist. The writing is good, but a final complaint is that there are too many characters to remember, especially the supporting characters. It takes forever to recall who they are. I suggest the author add more...

Having watched it for 18 years, even without continuous updates, it has achieved results close to that of Blood Princess.

The neighboring Austrian king waited five years and still came back to life; who knows when this guy will rise from the dead?

This book is the one that leaves me with the most unresolved feelings. I read it when I was just starting high school, and now that I'm in college, there's still no sequel.

First, the use of modern and communist terminology is jarring. Also, military uniforms are divided into service uniforms, field uniforms, and dress uniforms; dress uniforms are worn only by sergeants and above. (This is the regulation of the Federal German Army; I'm not sure about the PLA, but it's probably similar.) The area where the Binhai Navy was located generally used snow camouflage uniforms, which would definitely be unsuitable for a southward advance. The Binhai Navy didn't have service uniforms; I wonder if the author forgot. Finally, the use of terms like "People's Hospital" and "People's Army" makes it seem like the protagonist is trying to start a socialist revolution, which is particularly jarring, especially since this is a novel set in ancient times.

Tomb sweeping, dedicated to the first book on this website.

The plot is dragging and lacks satisfying moments. The author used two entire volumes, nearly two hundred chapters, to get the protagonist from transformation to awakening their power. During that time, the protagonist was constantly getting beaten up and was incredibly weak. At the end of the second volume, the protagonist finally awakens their power, but then can't fight and gets beaten up again. I don't know if the author intended for the protagonist to have a powerful moment later. But in my opinion, the current story is just dragging, generally depressing, and lacks any climax. Also, the protagonist's actions are very confusing. So confusing that when they get beaten up later, I felt like they brought it on themselves.