The Unconventional Grand Secretary

The traveler's time passes in the scroll of poetry, the news of apricot blossoms arrives amidst the sound of rain. ༺࿈Zhuangzi, "Spring of All Things"࿈༻

Why use the comma instead of the pause mark for punctuation?

The content is excellent, it's really good.

꧁❦༺ "Essence of Traditional Chinese and Western Medicine"༻❦꧂ The eye and form, I do not know the difference, yet the blind cannot see themselves. The ear and form, I do not know the difference, yet the deaf cannot hear themselves. The mind and form, I do not know the difference, yet the mad cannot find their own peace.

This is pretty good too.

The southern slopes of Zhongnan Mountain are beautiful, with snow piled up at the edge of the clouds. The forest reveals a clear, bright color after the rain, while the city grows colder with the approaching dusk.

Well written

A couple was sitting in a park when the woman suddenly wanted to fart. She said, "I'll imitate a cuckoo's call. Do you think it sounds like one?" The man nodded, and so, under the cover of "cuckoo, cuckoo," the woman happily let out a loud fart. The woman asked, "Does it sound like a cuckoo?" The man replied, "The fart was too loud; I couldn't hear it..."

It's very well written.

The unconventional scholar's story begins!