A Blank Journey

I'll try to come up with more stories for everyone these next couple of days.

The mystery plot in this book isn't particularly mind-bending, unless I try to incorporate more complex elements later on as my reading and writing skills improve. Also, the dream setting I had earlier isn't part of the protagonist's journey, but I still want to tell such a story well, so my update schedule won't be very fast. I also think that reading this novel will allow you to see my own improvement. Furthermore, I don't want to write overly overpowered protagonist plots; the monster in Chapter Four is just a supplement to the existing setting. There will also be some side stories to further develop the background. Thank you all for your support; I believe this novel won't disappoint you.

I must say, your paragraph breaks are a bit unreasonable; some sections are a bit too long. Shorter paragraphs would provide a better reading experience. I hope you can take my suggestion into consideration. Thank you.

Keep it up, author! It's really well written. Let's work hard together. You can check out my "Yuan Feiyu Part 1" when you have time.

Haha, the writing is good, but apart from the third chapter which is handled quite well, there are some minor issues. One chapter is crowded because the paragraphs aren't divided, and two other chapters, each five or six thousand words long, are tiring to read. They could be divided into four chapters. It's late today, so I didn't read it carefully. I'll make up for it next time. Keep it up!

Support the author and forge ahead!