Dreams on a Snowy Night in Qinghe

Dear readers, I apologize for the infrequent updates; I'm still a student and may only be able to update once every two weeks. I hope you can understand. However, please rest assured that I will bring you a fantastic story, and I also hope to receive guidance from experienced readers to continuously improve my work! It's an honor to have your support, and I hope you will continue to follow me! 😇

Chapter 8 was still rushed 😁 But keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง The taste will get heavier and heavier in the future hahaha (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia After all, I'm almost an adult, and I'm a seasoned veteran 😊 cough cough →_→ (you know what I mean)

Since I write male-oriented novels, I don't usually comment on female-oriented novels, but after reading one chapter, I still can't help but want to leave a comment. In my opinion, whether it's a male-oriented novel or a mother-themed novel, logical coherence is a very important aspect of the story. Your novel may not conform to physical or scientific logic, but it must ensure logical coherence; simply put, it must be self-consistent. It must be able to convince both yourself and the reader. The first half of your first chapter was actually quite well written. The protagonist encounters danger while on a mission and is transported to another world on the verge of death. The logic is consistent and there are no problems. However, problems started to arise after the protagonist transmigrated. He inexplicably obtained a purse containing a pile of loose silver coins. He later learned that the silver coins were a gift from a woman. The protagonist then gained the woman's trust with just one sentence, making her willingly acknowledge him as her sister. This whole process is a typical example of illogical plot twists. Would a normal person give money to a stranger who is unconscious on the street? No. According to the normal logic of the novel, at most, they would take the person home to help them heal, or simply leave them to fend for themselves. They would never give them money, much less immediately recognize someone as their sister. Although novels nowadays are required to be fast-paced and get straight to the point, the premise is that the logic must be coherent. If your logic is not coherent, no matter how fast you go, it will be useless. After all, today's readers are not stupid.

Keep it up, boss!

It should be a holiday for National Day, so let's do two updates a day.

Sending blessings to "Han Ruo Qing Cheng"!

Keep up the good work, author! I'm here to urge you to update! The little bottle has been sent.

Big shot, please support.

You should be writing more, all you do is chat in groups! Try writing 4000 words a day, how about that?

The book is good. I'll add it to my favorites and read it slowly when I have time!