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Lingxun, I'm here. I've never watched this type of show before, but I watched it this time to give Lingxun a review. I started watching from the parts you thought were dry. The female protagonist lost her memory after eating the Nightmare Flower and returned to the real world, but she had been missing for half a year. However, Xuan Lie and Xuan Ying stayed by her side, and I felt that Xuan Lie was really good. Lingqian, you said the male lead is aloof and taciturn, but I've noticed that all his tenderness is reserved for Xingyue. He's willing to talk a lot to Xingyue and explain things to her. He probably likes Xingyue but doesn't realize it. We could give him a chance to create some small accidents or something, and then their relationship could blossom. The female lead later remembered, but she insisted on returning to the real world. I think Xuan Lie could have gone with her, silently following behind her, gradually winning her back. For example, he could have her face some danger, like being harassed by thugs, and then the male lead would step in to save her (seems too cliché 🙈). Alternatively, the female lead could attend a classmate's birthday party, where a chandelier suddenly falls, and the male lead protects her and ends up in the hospital himself. (This is just my own idea 😂) The female lead feels guilty and so on. Lingxun can play along from here. The male lead saves her time and time again, so she should be grateful. That should end the cold war. Then there's this villain wanting to build an empire or something... I feel like resolving the Cold War would take several chapters, so I'll think about that later. Let's deal with the immediate issues first. 😂

To be honest, this is the first time I've seen a story of this kind. Please forgive me if anything is wrong. First of all, let me praise this story. It's very original and refreshing, and the lighthearted and enjoyable narrative made me relax completely. It's a great book. Furthermore, the protagonist's description, though concise, is very vivid, and his personality is very well-defined. I guess the author might be that kind of person? (﹡ˆOˆ﹡) Secondly, the paragraphs are very concise, the layout is comfortable, there are no long blocks of content, and the punctuation is convenient, which is great. Finally, I'd like to mention that, for some reason, your writing style seems a bit immature. While the content is good, the transitions between scenes are a little awkward and could be polished a bit. Some sentences could be glossed over; otherwise, they feel somewhat redundant. Hmm~ that seems to be all, that's about it. Keep it up!