Tales of Feng Shui and Mystical Arts

Come check it out! The style is realistic, the writing is simple and unpretentious, and the logic is rigorous—it's definitely worth a look!

I've read the whole thing before commenting. His writing style is mature and experienced; his writing career should be judged on a ten-year basis. There are a few suggestions; if the author finds them unreasonable, they can simply ignore them. The story is engaging, but it lacks detail and the scenes are empty and lifeless, making it difficult to visualize. The character design is too simplistic, the character lacks depth and soul.

The synopsis could be more detailed; it's too short and not easy for readers to understand. Having read the beginning, the writing style and descriptions are excellent; the author is clearly experienced and not too young. 😄 Readers like me who can sit still and read attentively will find the book good, but the audience for online novels generally prefers fast-paced stories, so it all depends on the appeal of your book. Let's keep up the good work!