Watch the Wind Slay the Rain

This afternoon I spent nearly three hours reading all 31 chapters of your work, and now I have a general understanding of it. If I hadn't read it all at once, I really wouldn't have understood it; it's quite profound. What first catches the eye is the description of the two immortals' wedding night, with its gorgeous language and vivid story, which leads to the climax. However, due to the interference of a celestial bird, this unprecedented wedding turned into a tragedy. The heroine, Ling Xue'er, died. The grief of losing his wife fueled Bai Lingqi's fantasies, leading him to move to the mortal realm, where he "repeatedly entered the mortal world to meet her." After descending to the mortal realm, the Holy Dragon Emperor (Bai Lingqi) encountered the young lady Yu Shiqi. The author devoted a large portion of the story to describing the Cinderella-like experiences and tragic tale of Yu Shiqi. I think this scene was excellent; it almost brought me to tears. I felt a strong urge to help her, and the scene was incredibly immersive. Then, surrounding the story of Cinderella, a foreigner named Adonis is introduced in these chapters. I believe everyone will be completely confused after reading this. Also, it would be better to give a brief account of Yu Shiqi's birth; although the scars on her face are mentioned, they are not very clear. After watching so much, I always feel that the real excitement is just beginning, and everything before that is just setup. This is just a casual post, please forgive me!

She lacked a beautiful face, so she had never experienced warmth or received love. Her unexpected arrival on this magical continent may have been the beginning of her beautiful dream.

The novel is very well written, with a unique style that vividly depicts the scenes. The plot is clear and the ideas are imaginative. I really enjoy it and look forward to the next chapter. I've already added it to my favorites and will continue to support it. I look forward to visiting your page again.

The author writes very well. Although one chapter was locked and I didn't see it, I have to say I really liked the first chapter. The melancholic feeling of the ancient style... Will there be more scenes like that later? ∠( ᐛ"∠)_

First, the title attracted me, and the writing was simple yet exquisite.

This is really well written! Keep up the good work, author! I've already bookmarked it.

Thank you for your support.

A book with substance yet without being pretentious, written in vivid and engaging language, with interesting character portrayals, and plenty of tear-jerking moments. It's truly an excellent book in its genre, so much so that I find it hard to criticize it (it really is a good book).

I've been thinking about how to better blend mythology and reality, or perhaps write a science fiction story like mine, but it seems I've gotten a bit carried away and rushed things 😂. Or maybe I could write a typical cultivation story like most others. But this author's work is the best I've ever seen—a dual-narrative structure that leaves you wanting more. I eagerly await your masterpiece!

A follow-up visit, keep it up!