Justice Has Two Edges

After reading the synopsis, I realized you can't write it like this! Nobody will want to read it. You need to understand, this is online fiction, but what you've written leans towards serious literature. It's more suited to a magazine. Practice your writing, study articles from major magazines like *Reader*, elevate the theme, and maybe you'll succeed. If you were writing online novels, you'd never succeed like this. I'm writing book reviews with the intention of finding fault. I can't find any major flaws in the writing style, but I also can't find any satisfying moments. You've written several articles already, yet this one still only has around 4,000 reads. If you really want to write web novels, there's a great writer on Zhihu called "Xuanmiaomiao" who teaches how to write them. If you don't want to change, then practice your writing, elevate the theme, and look at publishing houses or major magazines. The choice is yours; it's up to you to decide what you want.

The writing is decent; it captures the unique simplicity of the countryside. The language is quite good, the layout is clear, and it's easy to read quickly. It's just that the cover is missing, making it feel soulless 😂. Wishing it great success!

After reading it, I think the writing is good. Keep it up! It captures the genuine and simple life in the countryside, without too much luxury. Hope you'll continue to update! (Please show your support and visit my page! "That Winter I Was With You," a storyteller's account!!!)