Anything Goes: Naruto OL

Forgive my bluntness, but the scenes introducing your characters are somewhat chaotic, there are some errors in the sentences, and more importantly, the use of punctuation is far too sloppy and completely haphazard. I seriously suspect that you haven't properly revised it after finishing it. I suggest you go back and check each chapter after you finish it to see if there are any problems. As for the use of punctuation, I don't know if you don't know how to use it or if it's intentional, but whatever the case, I still suggest you use it properly, because the punctuation is too messy and makes it very uncomfortable to read.

The storyline is good, but it would be even better if the synopsis were more engaging. If you have time, please feel free to give me some pointers on my writing style. 🌝🌝

I'll reserve a sofa.