From the Start, I Had a Chicken. Sign-Ins Made Me Invincible

Let me put it this way, I've been reading novels for seven or eight years now. See if you remember how I had a complete mental breakdown after finishing this one. The first 300-odd chapters were relatively enjoyable, but the more I read, the more something felt off. It felt like the author had changed, especially the ending, which was incredibly abrupt and exaggerated. And basically, none of the plot holes were filled. Who exactly is the protagonist's sister? Where is she? What's she from? Feng Xiaoqi mentioned her, and that was it. And Lin Yuxi, honestly, you could have just been ruthless and killed her during her fight with the protagonist. The rest of the story felt so awkward. After finishing it, I even wondered what I was reading. (Word count not reached, so that's all.)

I'm giving you my sincere advice: a single female lead, like "Immortal Liuli," how about that? You don't want your book to go astray, right? Remove that Annie character, and also delete the storyline where the system does Shangguan Shui'er's quest. That would make the book much better.

Author, couldn't you have changed Annie, who brought the protagonist to her senses, to Xian Liuli? That wouldn't have felt so abrupt, and it would have allowed Lu Jia to awaken and become a woman, making the two of them a couple.

I strongly request that the female lead be Lin Yuxi.

------------Will surely become a god--------------

Absolutely amazing! It's been so long since I've read such a good book. During this reading slump, the author is fantastic! Keep it up!

I haven't read such a good story in a long time; it's simply amazing!

It's awesome and looks great.

Seeing over 500 words was painful to read. Why did she have to be reborn as a woman? It felt like the author had become a completely different person.

I've decided to ****, hahaha~ "The Ghost Lawyer" and "Starry River" (over a million views)