Diary of a Great Pirate

The ocean has so many stories, it's very well written. Keep it up, keep going! A small, immature suggestion: break it into paragraphs more often, otherwise readers will find it tiring.

Has this been a journey into a book? What a unique start! However, the first chapter is a bit flat; perhaps it would be better if it were more lively?

The layout is problematic, especially on mobile devices. It's relatively hard on the eyes, so three or four lines per paragraph is enough. You can also read some books by experts and learn from them. The writing style is acceptable.

Pirates? A hectic and exciting life, keep it up!

I read a few chapters carefully, and I don't remember the characters' names very well, but I personally think the dialogue could be divided into segments. Overall, the plot is quite well constructed. There are also highlights that attract readers.

Your writing is very vivid, keep it up!

What impressed me most about the author's article was the ship. It was depicted so realistically! It was shown from every angle. I will continue to follow the story!

Are you not going to write which chapter?

I think you should make a cover...

Keep it up!