Because Love Has Its Setbacks
因为爱情有挫折
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 89k Words
- Genre
- Romantic Youth
- Subgenre
- Campus Life
- Updated
- 10y ago
- English
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63Chapters
6.8kClicks
24Favorites
99Recommendations
26Comments
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It's very well written.
Although the plot structure has some flaws, it is subjectively a very interesting novel.
Welcome to "My Devilish Husband, Please Step Aside"
Welcome to "My Devilish Husband, Please Step Aside"
The novel was completed after two months.
[Color=blue] [Shiran Writing Forum] Yu Ruoxi
Hey Xiaojuebi, Axi's here to review your work! [I've already checked the first three chapters and the thirty chapters after you finished reading, and then a few more.] Overall, the highlight of the story is the psychological descriptions of the characters, and the action descriptions are also good, but there are still some flaws; it feels a bit disjointed. Here are some specific problems: ① The dialogue flow is very poor in the first three chapters, making it feel like reading a script. It improves a bit later. ② The descriptions are repetitive. Too many words are used; try replacing them with similar-sounding words. ③ The descriptions of expressions seem a bit stiff; could be revised. ④ Some parts are too wordy; the same idea is repeated twice in one paragraph, and used unnecessarily. Finally, I wish you a speedy rise to godhood, just like your pen name, Goddess of Dawn! [Ahem, actually, I quite like Lena.] I look forward to your next work! I'm learning...
I reviewed "The Battle to Defend Campus Love".
Anyway, I'm really afraid of those circles and stuff.
I reviewed "The Battle to Defend Campus Love".
Awesome!
The content is simple and straightforward, and the structure is unclear. However, it's slightly better than the first one. Overall, it needs improvement.
I reviewed "The Battle to Defend Campus Love".
Come on,
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