Gentle Words at Dawn

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Hey, first of all, I have to commend the author for their excellent sentence structure, which made reading a pleasure even for a bookworm like me. However, the sentence structure is also problematic; there are too many commas. I think adding more semicolons ";" would strengthen the story's logic. Similarly, the synopsis is a bit lengthy, especially since even "Where is the road ahead?" Is broken into sentences. If you read it yourself, the mood changes completely depending on where you read it, which might be a bit confusing for me. The first chapter flows incredibly smoothly overall! However, the male lead's surname is so cheesy, like something out of a Mary Sue novel, haha! As a guy, it's almost embarrassing. Well, of course, it's a female-oriented novel, so I might not be able to appreciate this good book from a straight-male perspective. But I still have to give credit to the combination of the title and the name! And the beautifully described supermarket clerk isn't even the main character... I really don't know what to say. Oh dear, that's a bit too realistic, haha. —Kaka That's all for November 13, 2018. Well, after all, I'm a boy, so I can't write very long comments.

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