The Dragon Falls to the Mortal World

I should give a long review now. Actually, I hesitated a bit, feeling I wasn't qualified to write a review of this book. Why? Because I'm not qualified. A cursory glance at the book reveals that the author clearly put in a lot of effort. The details and psychological descriptions feel seamless and quite spot-on. This is a major highlight! However, if I had to find fault, the update speed is a major issue, not to mention the slow pace. Also, the story development is slightly dragging. Ah, online novels, fast food—this fast-paced rhythm is also a headache for me. I once heard a great author say that ideally, one story per chapter, one conflict every three chapters, a key point every five chapters, and a major comeback every ten chapters. Everyone understands the principle, but it's hard to put into practice! Fortunately, I believe that with the author's writing style, if he has the time and can maintain a stable update schedule, this underdog's rise to power is only a matter of time! Persistence is key! Also, there's one more thing. I think the author, like me, made a mistake: rushing things! Why do I say that? It's an incurable disease! The story's positioning wasn't well-chosen, the concept wasn't comprehensive enough, the reader's mindset wasn't thoroughly analyzed, and their needs weren't adequately considered! In short, I think you should go all out and finish this as soon as possible! Remember, your next book must be fantasy; with your writing skills, fantasy is the true path! Whether you believe it or not, I believe it! Keep going and finish it! Become a legend, it's just around the corner!

Actually, I've always had a fascination with this type of novel. The first book I read in this genre was called "Martial Arts Masters on Campus" by Mo Wu. At the time, I thought the title was a bit tacky, but a friend recommended it, so I read it. I was surprised to find that the author's writing was quite good. After reading your book, I found that your novel has the same feel as his. Although it's a web novel, it still has its own literary flair. Chapter 14: "The person before me seems like an old friend, but the old friend is gone, and the person is not the same as before. We gaze at each other, only adding to the desolation." Chapter 23: "Life is full of disappointments, and only a drunken stupor can relieve a thousand sorrows. In this colorful world, in this turbulent world, besides wine, where else can you find such a cheap thing?" And the reference to "Phoenix Seeking Phoenix" in Chapter 31—all these demonstrate the author's excellent writing skills. In this era where light novels are popular, it's quite remarkable that the author can still achieve such literary flair. Mo Wu's line: "Do not dance, for you have not seen how even Yang Guifei and Zhao Feiyan have turned to dust." This is for the author. I think it's quite remarkable that the author can maintain such writing quality without sacrificing imagination. It's clear the author has put in a lot of effort. Regardless of what others say, I think the author should persevere. I don't want the author to abandon the project. However, the first few chapters were a bit bland. If the beginning had been more engaging, this book should have achieved considerable success.

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Clown, it's been a while since I've written this long review. I've been busy lately, and also because I needed to carefully read your book before I could give you a proper review. I can't write a long review for every book. I've always believed that a long review is like a book report—it's a heartfelt feeling that can't be expressed in just a sentence or two. Okay, enough rambling, let's talk about the book. First of all, your cover is very attractive. Seeing the person on the cover gives you the illusion that he's not an ordinary person, or rather, you can tell at a glance that he's not like us. How to put it? This feeling is very strange, making me want to look at it more. I found many typos in your text. I know that male-oriented novels update very quickly every day; perhaps this is because you type so fast. You've created the character Long Yin very successfully; his personality is distinct, and his grudges are clear. But these aren't the most important things. What attracts me most is...

Is the author not planning to release a new book?

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I've found a great book! It's finished, and I'll savor it slowly as I read!