The Maoshan Ghost King

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The plot and writing are both mediocre, lacking tension, bland and uninteresting, a mere chronicle of daily life, like a casual chatter session. While the work draws inspiration from life, it shouldn't be a literal, unrealistic portrayal. Starting with such an ordinary little story, and writing it so verbosely, focusing solely on a sorrowful scene and a pointless question from a little kid. Those who enjoy suspense know what the author's father does; the attempt to create atmosphere through the protagonist's perspective fails. The writing is inadequate, the atmosphere is poorly built, and it doesn't contribute to the main plot, making the entire work rather mediocre. The lack of tension, the dragging and bland plot failing to highlight the main storyline, and the overemphasis on trivial details that could be easily ignored or glossed over—these are the book's fatal flaws. Instead of wasting time on building hype and hiring followers to boost rankings, focus on improving your writing. You're a writer, not a media professional.

This book is really bad. It jumps around too fast, and reading it is like chewing wax—it's tasteless.

Early in the morning, the Taoist priest from Maoshan, who was skilled in exorcising ghosts, visited...

Great book! I support the author of "Tales of Strange Cities"!

A masterpiece in the Maoshan series! A true gem among books! I, a humble humble writer, have come to visit with my copy of "The Age We Once Ventured Through." I've witnessed your hard work, and the book is indeed excellent. Let me tell you, this book has three main characteristics: First, the writing is superb and well worth reading; second, the language is fluent and the sentence structure is logical; third, it demonstrates innovation and vividness. I hope you will continue your creative efforts and offer me guidance and criticism. If you have money, please donate; if not, please leave a stamp, send flowers, or add it to your collection. Please don't call me shameless; I simply hope you will be generous with your advice and criticism. Thank you very much!

Interesting, keep it up, author! Quite captivating! I'm here to support *The Yin-Yang Exorcism Chronicles: The Tale of Hai Zongzheng Yang*! @GusuXiaodao

Bringing "Criminal Investigation Consultant" for sightseeing, hoping for great efforts.

It seems like it's not finished yet, and there's no ending?

Keep it up, the writing is good, I've already added it to my favorites, remember to visit and favorite it back! "Soul Soaring"@GusuXiaodao