Da Qin Arrested the Alchemist, What Does It Have to Do with My Qi Refiner?

It's too long-winded. In more than 100 chapters, the number of protagonists appearing is only in the single digits.

The writing is too tedious, with a bunch of classical Chinese texts and explanations at every turn, which makes it more and more annoying.

1. There are no more than five lines for the protagonist in more than 100 chapters. It is recommended that the book be renamed "The Observation Diary of a Mute Passerby". 2. Lightning protection! The protagonist is mute throughout the whole movie and relies entirely on the author's narration to forcefully tell the story. I wanted to speak for him. 3. This is the first time I met the protagonist in a novel that has less dialogue than the background. It has more than a hundred chapters and doesn't even have a complete self-introduction. 4. Does the author not know how to write dialogue? The protagonist pretends to be mute throughout the whole process and relies entirely on God's perspective to push the plot, which purely tortures the readers. 5. I wasted two hours just reading more than a hundred chapters with a wooden man walking around without saying five sentences.

What the hell are you writing? It doesn't make sense.

The plot of Cultivation to Immortality is too slow, the protagonist is basically a background, and the sense of participation is very weak. It does not highlight the feeling of overwhelming or counterattack in most Cultivation to Immortality novels.

The clarity of the water. There is also a wave of cancer in the water world. I don't even know how to describe it. Maybe my writing skills are not good. All I can say is. Mr. Wang's pen is as big as a rafter, and he writes about the Spring and Autumn Period. However, the words between the lines are full of meaningless words, and half of the words in his chest are not visible.

What the hell are you writing? You will be in trouble for the rest of your life. Click here and fuck me, wasting me half an hour

As I watched, I suddenly changed into a different person. From the Song Dynasty back to the Qin Dynasty, the protagonist was no longer the same person.

Grinding endlessly. One thing can be written into ten or twenty chapters. A lot of nonsense. The protagonist is just a backdrop, and the stories are told from the perspective of the supporting character.

Pure lump