Heaven-Destroying Technique

Wonderful writing

Two-headed Celestial Beast x Two-headed Angelmon x Two-headed Celestial Beast. You have to repeat it countless times in one sentence. You are so disgusting. You can't even write a book with your writing skills.

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The protagonist is a puppet

I was pleasantly surprised when I saw the "Preface" and thought it was a masterpiece; I was also very interested in reading the first seven chapters. Then I was disappointed! First, I used the protagonist to save the second child to make up the number of words; then I tried to make up the number of words by fighting evil spirits... At the 100th chapter, the protagonist was still twelve or thirteen years old, and he was still fighting evil spirits... In short, the writing felt very childish and awkward to read! So he abandoned it.

The plot is bland and the logical loopholes are too obvious.

Chapter 76 is like if if if if always comes in a row. When you hear chapter 163, you have to ask the author's ancestors from 810 generations to say all the greetings without missing a beat. I don't know what to say in 99 out of 100 sentences.

The protagonist's brain is not working well, and he always listens to others on everything. If the protagonist dies, the protagonist will be desperate. If the protagonist lives, the protagonist will feel lucky.

It's childish. After reading more than 20 chapters, it's still a group of seven or eight-year-old brats fighting. Is this a children's book?

The plot is full of twists and turns, quite fascinating!