Immortality Begins with the Dog Official

I feel that the writing is very confusing, and I gradually can't understand it later. I don't know what it is written? Everything is fake and everything is true, even the system has to be doubted. Is it interesting to write such a mess? It looks so foggy and foggy, it's not interesting!

I have read it, the first and middle stages are okay, but the later stages are like a novice. The author secretly told me if someone has changed. I promise not to beat you to death.

The plot is enough to have the power to conquer the world, but the subsequent plot of Taixu feels like superfluous and unnecessary! As the author summed up, the plot of being an official is missing and does not match the introduction! I originally wanted to rate it as average, because the power system in the plot was messed up later on, but in the end the author himself summed it up well! Come on! For example, Xu Chong was an official in Canglong County. It can be said that his experience as an official was not written at all. He was only entangled with the villain from beginning to end, which made the protagonist image of "a fake dog official and a real blue sky" lack a lot of strong support. In the early and middle stages of this book, I have always been obsessed with logic. I wish I could explain everything and everyone's reasons clearly. This verbosity really affects the reading experience. The yellow hall in the government office is a blessing for the past and for the present. Canglong adds beautiful scenery, benefits the people and the country, and brings good fortune.

It was okay in the early stage, but the water got really bad later on.

I have read about eighty chapters, and so far, the writing is still very good.

The back doesn't look good, but the front and front are a bit fresh.

There are very few books that I can finish reading in the past two years, and this one is one of the rare ones. Like👍🏻

In fact, the setting at the front is quite good, except that it feels a bit rushed at the end, and it's a bit unclear. However, the first half of the book has already surpassed many cool articles.

Not bad, but a little impatient.

The story is actually quite interesting. One is that the setting is too complicated; the other is that the protagonist has a golden finger and some background background is added, which does not allow readers to feel the experience of going all the way from the bottom to the top. Furthermore, it feels like the supporting characters are just passers-by who come to pave the way for the protagonist. In the end, only the protagonist is left with a sense of déjà vu. The protagonist accidentally killed his wife and created a demon for himself, which affected the viewing experience. It was boring, so I just skipped to the ending. Sure enough, the protagonist was left alone in the end. (Although I relied on the postscript to make up for it)